Can you do Love Hina as well?

Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.

This is amazing. All my feelings rolled into one about the two fandoms. Though I like Jiraiya. His perversions aside, He is a sage and gave Naruto the means of becoming one. Anyway this is amazing Thank you!

really good story I've enjoyed it immensely

This was the best fanfiction story I have ever seen that connects the Naruto universe to the Ranma Universe. You deserve to get an award for the fanfiction. I would even dare say, you could have expanded this into a series of how Naruto and Hinata trained Ranma and Shampoo as well their daily lives. It would be very interesting to read if you had gone with that idea. I love this one-shot so much. Thank you for creating it.

that was good keep the chapters coming

This is a great one-shot! I LOVE how Naruto helped out Ranma by getting rid of his old man! And Shampoo and Ukyo marrying Ranma is a great way to end it! I liked those two the most out of the girls on Ranma. I wish there was another wife for Naruto though, Ino or Anko or someone.

Two things I'd like to point out.

A) If Naruto was "hired" by Nodoka's parents, how then did Naruto owe a debt to the Saotone Clan?

Nidoka's maiden name wouldn't be Saitome, but something else. See Vimesenthusiast's Ranma/Macriss crossover, where her maiden name is Sugita.

Only way around that would've been if Genma had married INTO the family. See Gendo Ikari from NGE, whose birth name is Rokubungo or something like that.

And seeing how Genma has always been referred too as Saotome, the second scenario just isn't credible.

B) Nodoka wouldn't happen to be descended from Gai or Lee is she? Some of her "conjured" background images are very reminiscent of Gai and Lee's Eternal Sunrise of Youth or whatever the name is of the genjutsu caused by their manhug of DOOM.

Exagerated but fun! I enjoyed reading it.

Good story, though I'm surprised Happosai didn't make an appearance.

who are the crimson cat gang?

Soun and Genma are morons, true, but Akane and Nabiki were not really that bad. I'd say the collective fanon has corrupted each and any bit of characterization the two had.

Rather than establishing fanon bias, it would have been better to manipulate events to make the readers believe such characterization.

It is fun messing with one dimensional characters but not as believable, and rarely likeable.

The black and white morality you are using just don't cut it for this particular fic, with both series having too many grey morality in them, for whichever plot it serves.

This is, as far as I can tell, is a wish fulfillment fic playing on both sides of the series. You would be better off focusing only on one side at a time, Ranma's first, then Naruto's. The sudden tangent into Naruto's bits of past cuts off the story of Ranma itself, jumping the focus between the series haphazardly.

Write more, write often.
Explore your characters, expand their horizons, intuit what the original authors wanted to portray, and skew them horribly, for that is fanfiction.

Bueno... No soy partidario del bashing pero me gusto por favor vfsnake san haga otra historia referente a ranmaXshampoo es mi pareja favorita no me importa si es bashing lo que importa es que pueda leer mas historias referente a esta pareja

Another extremely enjoyable story by you keep up the amazing work. Have a nice day.

esta historia esta interesante ojala la reflejaran con otro anime