This is the chappie I'm up to. I'm guessing the little girl is Freya and the Doctor's?

So, what, she gets kidnapped for rapists along with other girls and gets saved but the others have to go through with it and suffer? Did the other girls gets saved?

Ch 1 OMFG! I’m already bloody hooked! Time! I need TIME! Read I Must! Looooooooove!

This is like the 5th time I’ve read this story. Thank you, it’s amazing x

sCREEEEE
but ohhhhhh fuckinh fuck no
Fuckinh fuckitttty fukkkkkk
No fucking no
Not dealing with this shit

i love this story. first doctor who story and its amazing

I like the story sofar

Wait, what? You mean I savor this, saving it for some night when I really needed the lift, only to have the Doctor leave Freya behind? Oh wow (skips over to the sequel)...

Is Bad Wolf her child? That is what keeps passing through my head while reading. Thanks for a great story. :-)

Hi there!
Okay, so, I'm reviewing chapter 9 right now, i.e., the chapter you put warning labels on.
First of all, i want to say i really like this story. One of the things that usually bugs me about OCs is that though they are inserted, nothing changes from the canon. Which is unrealistic, because having someone there that has a relationship with the doctor would definitely change things. And you use that! You arent afraid to change canon, which is great, because thats what makes the story interestimg, and not just a novelization of the episodes.
So back to this chapter.
I think there is something you definitely need to change, and that is your warning at the beginning. It gives no warning about the almost-rape or the sexual assualt/forced prostitution in the chapter. It's always good to give that warning so all your readers stay comfortable, and then give a brief explanation of the important thing that happened at the end of the chapter (she and the doctor had sex).
I did not like that you used rape/potential rape as a device for showing how Freya trusts the doctor. Even though it was technically consenual between them, it was heavily pressured and more like dubious consent then having any sort of real value. Her choice was between a man she just met and a man she'd know for months, which in any situation is an easy decision, let alone about life-saving sex. It also devalues the intamacy of the act. In a story where youre building romance and a relationship, trust can be shown in many ways that arent sexual, and that kind of complete trust that leads to sex, and essentially is a fully-consented, fully-wanted act of love, should be built to more.
You have a good story, and I'm going to keep reading, but I felt the need to reivew about that subject.
Bye!

I have read this story twice now. I like this so much. I mean the characters are great. And it's just so spot on and has that element that most fan fics forget about. Well thank you and keep on keeping on.

I rather enjoyed it.

I am now crying, you have made me cry over a dalek, can I just like give u an air hug for your awesomeness of actually being able to make me cry?

I love this story, I really do. You make me connect with Freya, (amazing name by the way) and I get the way she is feeling and I I still am crawling my way out of the abyss day by day. Anyways I can't wait to read more. PS. I love it when she gets all sarcastic. :)

I like the way that you gave us a little more information on Freya by using her younger self and that flashback to her and Sarah's child. OH! I LOVED the Doctor/Freya moments were adorable. I also love her relationship with the TARDIS. Also just so you know your book is completely different than any others I've read on , , and , In a good way of course. Great Job I love your book!