PLEASE UPDATE! This is awesome story, I love it so much! I hope you can put the next chapter soon!

I love this. I just adore fanfiction writers who write long chapters. Its so thorough and neatly written. I don't know how to say it but I'll try anyway, reading this story made me feel smarter for some reason. That probably sounds weird but its how I honestly feel. You did a great job and its very apperent that its well thought out. I have an account here but I'm too lazy to sign in but I bookmarked the story. I'm definately adding this to my favorites.

This was really really good and. Really hope you continue it I love it I hope robin reveals that he was a father to Slade

Cant wait for more, just a question how old is Robin in your story.

This is a wonderful story. Told in a unique writing style that isn't often seen here on . However as a writing class instructor taught me once it's write to your audience level and know what to expect in feedback from those who read it. Sometimes the vivid words; especially with this style; it can makes a reader have to go back and reread pages even whole chapters over and over again; it's like connect the dots, and utilize a memory skill that is often like a detective piecing backwards a puzzle from the inside to outward corners...it can be intimidating and sometimes hold readers back at arms length, from making any objective reviews... which might be why your not getting as much reviews as you'd like. Don't worry though it's a great story...I've actually loved reading your subtle hints; of Robin's dreams, his visions which are telling us a behind the scenes story of mistrust and of (lies) and that his story, why this really all occurred. I'm appreciating his guilt, but at the same time enjoying how your writing style is explaining to us that it's never been his fault, it was a set up upon him from the result of something else which happened. Though I'll admit even I am confused as to the whole tale. That's the style though, not to reveal all until it's own time/ It's the story style and you don't give it all away at the start, so as long as your the good author I know you to be, then I am expecting it all to be explained to me by the innards of the climax. Thank you for posting and sharing this with us, just remember it's not those reading's fault if they can't offer a review. In their minds they just can't articulate what's great or good, when they're satisfied and on pause waiting for the next revealing chapter. I bet at the end of the story you're going to get a whole lot of reviews because by then (they'll know) how to understand and have something to contribute back in reference comments about. Keep up the good work.

Wow! This chapter was a complete change of the last one, but that doesn't mean I don't like this chapter any less. Please update soon! :)

Great chapter! The way you describe Robin's emotions is amazing! I can always feel what he does and I was especially scared along with him because of your imagery and overall descriptions :D Great work! Update soon :)

Please update soon! ;)

mas mas muy bueno

Chapter was great and i like Slade's reasoning about Jericho. I can totally see Robin and Star dancing like that! (I love the Moulin Rouge!) the skit was hilarious! Not bad for staying up all night ;)

muy bueno

This chapter was amazing and beautiful! Our descriptions were so cool I loved it! His dream was a great idea and love how Slade reacted to him waking up screaming. I like how he keeps calling him little one and things like that because I like the father/son take and it makes it angsty for Robin :) overall this is really great! Keep it up! XD

Great chapter! I like how Slade kept referring to Robin as "little one!" xD Surprised Robin didn't say anything about that, but then again, he was extremely exhausted. Poor little birdie. Look forward to the next update! )

I'm enjoying your story so far and I find it pretty well written. :)

However, I do have one big suggestion for that I really think would improve your writing. I would recommend splitting up a lot of your paragraphs - many of them are very long and having such consistently long paragraphs can become muddling and tiresome for the reader. I think if you added more dialogue or just broke many of the original paragraphs down into shorter ones, it would improve your style.

Other than that, good job so far, and good luck! Looking forward to following this story. :)

And robin is now immortal like slade!