Reviews for A Snowflake in Spring
crazgus chapter 30 . 6/25
Very well written, emotional and heartfelt story. I only wish we got an epilogue with some kind of time skip!
YourSoulBuddy chapter 30 . 5/27
I absolutely love how you can understand everyone. Why Elsa's the way she is, the heartbreak you get when you finnally hear her backstory. The loving, yet lonely life. The happiness of finnally being able to have someone to spend time with. Her new bestfriend. Her sister, who had not made through birth. Feeling the way as she slowly broke down, into shattered piece's.

Hans and anna the death of their parents, which had morphed Hans into a protective, possessive brother. Who is scared of losing the only happiness and family in the world. Which had also lead him to his downfall, of violence. Justifying to himself that it's what best for Anna, although it isn't, you can't fault him for the way he is now.

An Absolutely well written story that should get more attention than it has.
YourSoulBuddy chapter 30 . 5/27
Just finished, and Absolutely Beautiful. The ending was realistic, there is never a perfect ending.

You are by far my favorite Arthur, I have had so many emotions during this book, although torn by the ending, and many unanswered questions. There is simply no way to answer every single one if you don't have them yourself. I wish you a ever loving life.
Guest chapter 30 . 5/17
Well, this was deeply unsatisfying.
someawe45 chapter 30 . 5/9
Woah... I just finished this and I’m legit bawling my eyes out... someone help me heal my poor, broken, bleeding heart
Spirit Of Dark Wolf chapter 30 . 5/4
Okay so, I’ve just finished a snowflake in spring, and surprisingly, I don’t mind the ending! I saw lots of reviews about it with people being mean as fuck (come on guys, what are you, 4?)
Sure, they are a lot of unanswered questions, we don’t know how Anna will react to the letter and god, I wanna know how Elsa managed to push Hans down the stairwell, but I felt like it fitted the story
It felt realistic
There are no fake promises, no fake happy ending with convenient solutions
I felt like it was right
And it truly shows the potential future that Elsa could have
Her future is uncertain and is purely based on her choices, it can get better, if she wants to
I love her character development, same thing for Anna, you were so good at creating a real character with feelings and thoughts
And I’m happy to know why Elsa decided to talk to Anna that day, thanks for explaining that

When all is said and done, maybe you rushed the ending, or maybe you wanted it to be that way, in any case, I enjoyed this story, a lot
The plot was great, it was realistic, you truly are a wonderful author and person too! You were lovely in your author notes
I know you retired a long time ago, but I needed to apologize for all these people who were real assholes in the reviews, who kept pressuring you and pestering you about new chapters and being ungrateful brats about the ending
You did great, and I might not be the most eloquent person around here (being French in that kind of situation does NOT help) but I felt like it was an important thing to say

Thank you for this wonderful story and I hope you are doing well
In any case, take care

Spirit Of Dark Wolf / Lara
Demons Of Doom chapter 30 . 4/24
Well, that a sad ending. Thank you for that. My day is fucked.
Alpha OmegaSquad chapter 30 . 4/20
What? That’s it!? Ahh man I hate endings like this this story was perfect, I mean it’s perfect for a time skip and a continuation of the story I was loving where things were going but then you cut off that’s like taking my chocolate and hiding it when I get up to grab it, in a word... EVIL, CRUEL, INHUMAN and so many other things. (Sigh) fuck alright then I think I said my peace, at least consider making a continuation it’d be a joy to read the story of the mute Elsa and try hard Anna and see what happens when they find each other again.
Alright signing off,
Alpha Omega Squad
Guest chapter 7 . 4/16
so good
Keepen chapter 30 . 4/8
this was my second fanficfion. I went in to it expecting a happy ending. I’m torn now, I wish the story ended differently but I can see why it didn’t. not everything in life is perfect and that includes Elsa and Anna in this story, not everything has a happy ending. and even though it ended on an optimistic note with the letter, I’m just utterly destroyed that they didn’t get a happy ending. not mad, just sad, because I wanted nothing more than them to be happy, but then Hans has to fuck it all up.

beautiful writing, beautiful story. but I’m gonna have to recover from this
chelsexx chapter 30 . 4/1
wow, thank you for bringing such a beautiful piece of art into our lives, of everything i have ever read, this has been the most heart warming and soul crushing thing i have ever come across and i cant tell you how grateful i am to have stumbled across this
LOvELeSsAfFAiRs chapter 30 . 3/28
So I just re-read this story in the time span of 6 hours. I know that I've read it before but it was incomplete when I first started it, so now is the first time I've read the ending. The majority consensus seems to be that the ending was rushed and while I can see that, I also get very intense Star Girl vibes from the last three or so chapters. Hopefully, you know the series, if not, it contained a very similar, tragic yet hopeful ending, so I very much enjoyed it. And with the release of Frozen II, the whole "Elsa hears a voice" didn't come off as far fetched as one might think. In the end, thank you for writing a beautiful, heartfelt piece. Every fandom has a list of titles that everyone knows, A Snowflake in Spring will forever hold the same grandeur as Tempest, r9k Elsa is suffering and Ice Behind Bars. Some fanfictions can just never be forgotten.
Jupiter S. Nikos chapter 30 . 3/17
damn it u leave us on way too many cliff hangers like what happens between meg and hurcules, will Hans live, will elsa ever speak, will elsanna ever become a thing?
Jupiter S. Nikos chapter 30 . 3/17
NO YOU CAN'T END IT LIKE THIS *cries*
Iluvtvshows chapter 30 . 3/6
Not the best ending
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