Omo.. the last line...OmO...The last line made my heart skipped a beat. OmO

awww...this was amazingly amazing. loved every thing about it and every little aspect you put in this. really showed lelouch in a different manner and cc too and completely made me love it!

Wow! I really liked this! I hope you get to continue this story in another fic. I really want more of this pairing

My heart... It hurts. Too cute though. I enjoyed it.

I REGRET NOTHING AHAHAHAHAH I really love your works keep it up :3

Needless to say it was a perfectly done, ethereally romantic and beautiful. However one would expect a person of Lelouch's intellect to figure out that it was CC herself. I mean can you find another person with such a mysterious demeanor, penchant for pizza, with whom he spent time in silence and enjoyed it. For me I imagine the end to be Lelouch putting up a front to hide his real feelings from CC even though he realized it was her as he didn't know what to make of their relationship. Great chapter again anyway, though would CC ask 'Where is my Cheese-kun' just for fun? :D

Great story, I still wish you'd somehow continue :/

Sort of a bittersweet ending with some hope. It was perfect. I love this story, I really do. And I'm glad C.C. is still in love with the real Lelouch. For a while there, I was worried that she would fall only for the fake side of him. I mean, him being nice is not necessarily fake, but there's definitely more to him than that. Ultimately though, she chose to bring the real Lelouch back, and give him back his real life. And while I like seeing a softer side to Lelouch, no one can deny that his rightful place in the world is being the badass conqueror of Britannia.
I was worried that C.C. was getting a bit too OOC. However, after some consideration, I can say that neither he or she were. Even though Lelouch and C.C. are not acting the way they were in the anime, this was an in between story where Lelouch is just a normal teenager. Of course his interactions with C.C. would be different. He's not trying to take over the world. And C.C. is softer in consequence of this. So considering the circumstances, the Lelouch and C.C. we're seeing in here are just right... you were on the brink of making them OOC, but you didn't fall over :)

No worries about him not falling in love with the real C.C., cause it actually does happen in the series anyway. We all know it xD

really liked how you portrayed the innocent sides of the characters that we know are supposed to other sides of the same coin.

are you going to write a stand alone, possibly further down during R2 with reference to this story? i would be nice to see if C2 does anything different with this new information of lelouch's innocent side, or if he discovers the hairclip for example (or cheese kun now that i think about it)

loved the way you portrayed the characters inner throughts and how you described their actions. it worked very nicely, especially during the period of the series

as always love your work keep writing :)

I've got to admit when I first read this story I waved it off with no interest, it wasn't that the story was bad rather than a story set pre-r2 where Lelouch doesn't know who C.C is didn't scratch my cluclu itch.
However after waking up this morning (it's morning in Europe) at five and seeing in my inbox "New chapter ny Swetatoo" I decided to read it out of shear boredom and the fact that I greatly enjoy other stories by you. And I'm glad I read it, it's one of the best stories I have ever red (then again I feel that way about all your stories so maybe I'm just a softie). The writing in this story is superb, and I don't mean in the grammatical way rather the way it conveys the feelings and emotions of the characters so well that you actually feel them (or maybe I'm just a big ol softie). However I think this story's greatest achievement is that it takes both C.C and Lelouch out of their element and makes them feel in character, hell more than in character they actually feel real. I think that is easy to write Lelouch as the bad motherfucker he is in the series, the same with C.C, it's easier to write her as her usual self . Why? Because they are characters in an anime (really good characters) and when you read a fanfic you are not just reading the level of character the author puts into the story you are also reading the ones you already know from the anime. That is this story's greatest strength, it creates new levels for the character so well that I guarantee you that even if I didn't know who this characters where I would have still though of them as good and round characters and I would have still enjoyed the hell out of it.
Also the part at the end when C.C says she's going to make him fall in love with the real her had me giggling like an idiot and rolling in my bed for 5 min straight, but maybe that's because I'm a softie.

I love this story! :)

This is awesome
hope you continue
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i wander how this will develop, love to see that you are able to portray the characters quite well, and the doubts that plague CC, can't wait for the rest

Very sweet story so far :D

Good I missed your stories so mucchh !