Reviews for Greatness Comes From Small Beginnings |
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Guest chapter 1 . 3/9 Please update |
Guest chapter 15 . 3/3/2019 Another uncharted reference FTW as soon as they started arguing about the dishes I was like let me guess play you for it I love the uncharted series |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/28/2018 Uhhhh. If that happened in real life, then you're co worker better be in an asylum or something. |
vulthurmir chapter 16 . 7/24/2018 I finished reading this story after 364 days from last update. |
Aaayjay chapter 16 . 1/17/2018 The story is very good and I hope the author heals from his disease, can’t wait for new chapters |
G R A Y chapter 16 . 9/6/2017 I have finished reading this whole series and it was truly beautiful. Red character had such a sad past its no wonder the poor boy acted that way. And Leaf, bless her heart (": I hated albert and kyle donald etc FUCK THEM for causing so much pain and misery )-: n im glad red reunited with his family and hehe this happy ending was beautiful nonetheless! Thank you for writing your stories despite your conditions :( have a speedy recovery! |
xSKILLETFANx chapter 16 . 8/31/2017 WOW! A great return to this story. I really, REALLY liked when Red brought Leaf to his mother's house. That whole scene was very good. It was honestly quite intense and I was shocked and scared for Red when his father walked in. Amazingly he budges and gives his father a chance. Of course it took a lot for him to decide that. |
PKMNMasterRed chapter 16 . 8/2/2017 Oh boy It's been a while since I last reviewed this, hell, even accessed this account. I'm just going to apologise really quick for how fucking cringy I was back in '14-'15. I've matured greatly since then. Anyways, on to the review, which may contain spoilers. Speaking of which, why do I even say that? You should know better to read the story before reading reviews on it. So It's been almost an entire year since the last update. And it was damn sure worth the wait. I've been having ideas in my mind since I read the last chapter about what exactly would happen, should Red's father return, and what do you know, one year later, he returns, and I'm actually thrown off by what happened. I honestly expected Red to just kill him right on the spot, as he mentioned in Chapter One. But, in all honesty, I don't really have much else to say. However, I will make a prediction on the child in one word that's also a meme. Loss. Guarantee it. |
xaxiel1572 chapter 16 . 7/28/2017 Well at least that didn't went as crazy as I thought it would. |
Guest chapter 12 . 7/19/2017 My dream has come true, Red and Leaf are together, I can now die happily |
Guest chapter 9 . 7/19/2017 My favourite chapter, it made me cry |
Curious soul chapter 15 . 8/17/2016 4DS?...WHAT FUTURE DEVICE HAVE YOU UNLEASHED UPON THIS WORLD!? WE CAN'T HANDLE SUCH FUTURE KNOWLEDGE YET! |
xSKILLETFANx chapter 15 . 8/14/2016 I still can't believe the massive transformation of Red and Leaf's personality. They are so different now. Very steamy scene there towards the end. Looking forward to what's next... wait did Red just say "lets get married" at the end :O |
LadyLuca chapter 15 . 8/10/2016 ... This a great story, even if i just started reading it. |
Jordanzz chapter 15 . 8/7/2016 What an amazing chapter, yet I still have one question. Does Red's mom come into play any time soon? |