This story has made some progress since I last read, the writing remains a rather good quality, plus you seem to be doing well at keeping focus on developing a small cast, which helps significantly. Anyway, nice story, keep up the great work!

HOLY HELL, DUDE!

Enjoying this read, but seriously... Holy hell. This dancing around and interruptions on their kiss is absolutely absurd. Like what's the point of that title when in 50k words they haven't even kissed and gotten in a relationship? They tease each other. Get close. Are most certainly aware that their feelings are mutual... Well, at least you've written in a well to imply that. You've basically developed them, even from earlier, to the point where the only thing not confirming their mutual attraction is the words themselves.

I don't know if that'll change in the next few chapters, but I might as well just throw my irritation out there. Again, I'm really enjoying this. You can become better, sure, but it's still good. But this cliche, generic, illogical Japanese romance trope you're pulling is not enjoyable when you use it so much.

In the future, don't pull this crap again. Leaves a bad taste in an otherwise good read. And if you want to delay a relationship... Well, there are better ways to go about it. Ways that actually make sense... Like implying they're scared, or life itself is legitimately getting in the way of alone time together.

Anyway, good luck. I hope you continue writing this as it's been fun. If you want constructive criticism, pm me. I haven't posted here yet, but I'm also a writer and like friendly, constructive stuff.

Three things you got wrong in this chapter:
1. Vergil doesn't give any excuses
2. Vergil Do not stutter.
3. Vergil don't give a single fuck.

I want Dante and Vergil to start fighting the second they see each other in true DMC fashion lol.

Good very good I’m very into this story I need more chapters I’m also loving how you’re developing Vergil and hopefully Dante and Vergil don’t start fighting each other when they reunite also hopefully Mizore won’t be upset when she finds out Vergil is already a dad

glad to see the update, was hoping to see Dante but that can wait lol

There are powerful demon lords you can either make up on your own or use from the Rosario Vampire manga to draw inspiration from. At least I think so as I am not really sure how many chapters and/or books there are from which you can use. I sure hope there are not a whole bunch of them to dig through. The manner in which you are avoiding Vergil simply dominate every single demon he fights is frankly remarkable as you are taking into consideration the immense power the legendary son of Sparda wields. With that said though, you are making it believable that while there is absolutely no doubt very few powerful demons can ever hope to match up against him, this Rataichi demon lord poses a significant threat. The Jackal demon Vergil just slayed under the guise of Orochi Minami proves that deception and trickery are what keeps Vergil from feeling too secure and complacent in his ability to protect himself and his friends.

Speaking of deception, he is catching on very quickly Gloria is not who she appears to be. On that very subject, since you are pairing up Mizore and Vergil together, it would only seem fair and natural to have Trish and Dante being a romantic pairing. That way Tsukune can keep his harem intact. Plus not only do I favor Trish/Gloria and Dante together, there isn't any Rosario Vampire woman I can legitimately see him with who are not already spoken for. It sounds like Dante knows of his twin brother Vergil attending Yokai Academy and wants to know what he is up to. thus Gloria/Trish is reporting back to Dante what she has learned.

Vergil as a blacksmith is precisely I imagine a hobby he would lean towards as he favors swords above all of his other weapons. I wonder if later on in the story if you plan on having him gain his Sin Devil Trigger and his other Devil May Cry 5 abilities. It is so adorable reading about the women cooking a special meal for Tsukune and Vergil. Ditto for Tsukune making a metal vase for Moka. Eventually Tsukune will be losing his humanity due to constantly being drained of blood from Moka and that near fatal blow he suffered at the hands of the Jackal. After such a long hiatus from the last chapter,you have uploaded a lengthy but fantastic new one covering just enough plot points.

I await to read the next chapter whenever that day will come.

Can't wait for the next update

he wouldn't of gotten scared. he is to proud to be scared he would always wear his mask this is a bad representation of Vergil. but it's still a good book...so far.

I Can't wait for the next update to see what happens

I feel like vergil is very much nerfed rn. That's ass

Have a good guess on who that new gym teacher is lol

Glad this story is still going.

Keep up the good work

It is always a magical and adorable treat to read Vergil and Mizore interacting with each other in such a caring and affectionate manner. I wonder when she plans on singing the "snowstorm" song just for Vergil. With how obsessive Kokoa is, demanding Moka to acknowledge her true nature and not hide behind her gentle persona,for Vergil, it has to bring painful memories of how he did the same thing,wanting Dante to embrace his demonic half and discard his humanity. Still though there is a far better chance of Dante and Vergil patching things between them unlike with Moka and Kokoa. Not to mention,Vergil always crave more power to better protect himself and was not really seeking it to rule over others or some other reason that would impact more than himself.

I think I have a very good idea who might be the brand new gym teacher and if my hunch is right, Vergil will be in quite for a shock along with his friends. Tsukune and Vergil are quite the oddballs out of all of students in Yokai Academy although I would have to imagine that Vergil is rightfully so has way more enemies than Tsukune. I wonder with which female will he be paired up. Or I suppose he can win the affections of two or more of them instead of merely having to choose between with the exception of Mizore.

Of course Orochi cannot be trusted. It is after all in his nature to deceive others. Whatever or whoever Orochi is taking order from has to be quite a very formidable adversary even for the son of Sparda. This will prove to be his biggest challenge yet.

It is alright. There is no need to apologize. Your personal affairs must always come first before writing. In any case though,see you next time whenever that happens for the next update. Until then, take care.