Lol this was hilarious and very interesting! Loved how Steve and Loki teamed up! XD

Did I catch a Supernatural reference in here? I believe the term "great big bag of d-cks" comes from a different 'Loki'...

This fic was ok. I think shield would recognize Steve though with facil recognition software as it is based on points on the face. I doubt losing a beard and dyeing hair would do anything.

Interesting start.

This is a really great and funny story and I read the sequel

I liked this. I'd be interested to know what the disagreement that was mentioned at the start was though. I really love how you've got Steve and Loki paired up too, I love stories that feature their friendship.

I'm looking forward to reading the sequel, I hope it's up soon!

Alex xx

I'm happy you're working on a sequel because this fic ended so abruptly and I want more!
Cap & Loki, as you write them, make a good team Overall, you have a very smooth writing style with only a typo here and there.

Once again, looking forward to the sequel.

Great story, I think Steve and Loki will make a fine pair they may be down but don't count them out. "The only way down is up" They'll find work and soon they'll have a nice place to live they and hopefully Loki will get his magic back. I wish only the best for Loki and Steve.