Reviews for Break Into Pieces
Amelia Wolfson chapter 14 . 9/10/2019
Was Emily swapped with a per-person? She was awfully understanding and tolerant...
Guest chapter 35 . 5/13/2018
SUCH A SWEET AND CUTE STORY
AMAZING JOB!
Very funny and sweet ending!
Maybe you should of extended the story towards the ending it felt like it was thrown together
AGAIN Good Job!
-Savannah GilVe B-
snowwygirl4 chapter 35 . 2/19/2017
I really liked this story! I like how we see Rory and Jess work through everything and how Logan is just a friend instead of them competing for Rory. I'm glad to have seen Luke and Lorelai together from the beginning and barely an ounce of Christopher. Also so different seeing Emily being the friendly grandparent but then Jess figuring it out and Richard being a little better. So it was nice to see it take a turn where Rory didn't leave Yale or anything. :)
Guest chapter 35 . 8/29/2014
Loved it, great ending! Hope you will write some more
Bisskit chapter 35 . 8/31/2014
The end :(
But it was such a sweet last chapter. And finally they take the challenge to try it again.
Thanks for sharing this story. I really liked to read it
Bisskit chapter 34 . 8/31/2014
Thank god they stayed in contact. ..
And Christopher showed up... this was about time ;)
Bisskit chapter 33 . 8/31/2014
There he is again. Logan...
And jess is there too... excited
Messica42 chapter 35 . 8/29/2014
This was incredible thank you for giving me an ending with Jess and Rory.
carrambar chapter 35 . 8/29/2014
Hey! Nice ending! I love it! I hope you'll continue to write!
Nancy chapter 33 . 8/27/2014
ah, a meeting at the grandparents' house? That is a surprise of sorts. And Logan is his usual cocky and annoying self. So glad that Jess is quickly able to tell Rory the news - and she has something wonderful to think about. Meeting at the bridge - so realistic. And darling Luke, he just wants them to be happy together and makes the sound decision to just talk it through, no intrusions, just good communication. Good thinking, Luke! Thanks for writing and sharing. More soon please.
Bisskit chapter 32 . 8/26/2014
Uuh... can't wait what jess has done. ..
Bisskit chapter 31 . 8/24/2014
Iha. 3 chapters in one day. Thanks. ..
Rorys brother was born. Jess showed up.. jess left again. They know they love each other and so I really hope he finds soon what he's looking for... well... maybe he needs some competition. Maybe it's time for a yale boy to show up and wanna win rorys heart!
Can't wait how you'll continue with this little sad ending of a chapter ;)
jbarbosa12 chapter 28 . 8/20/2014
Wonder how well jess will deal
Bisskit chapter 28 . 8/20/2014
Jess is back. ..again. ..
I hope he finds out that all he wants is Rory
Please update asap
Bisskit chapter 27 . 8/13/2014
Lorelai is pregnant. Yeah!
And jess stays. I hope he discover soon that the thing he's looking for is in front of his face: rory
Can't wait for more
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