Magnificent story

Damn, why amazon ? they require credit cards :

Holy cow this is a masterpiece. Like just ungodly how wonderful it is-the idea and the execution. What I would do to be Yang. Angry Blake gives me life.

we need more

fucking glorious I need more.

Great.

Haha, great stuff.

sorry to only have reviewed now but this was simply too good a read to stop Ruby an Weiss desecrating the office on a weekly basis an the elevator every once in a while, the store room is a whole other mess (lol) and poor (maybe) innocent being exposed to all that

I know this one is quite old but I did enjoy it, I feel like you captured it perfectly. :)

Liked the first two chapters, but I can't say I am too happy with the last. For one, seeing how it was clearly not the first time Yang tangled with the criminal elements of Remnant, seeing that she clearly knew that Junior was someone who knew shady things, I don't really think Yang would be so utterly surprised that some people play unfairly.

In fact, I I would go as far as to say that Yang knows that too well, seeing as she hardly plays fair herself. Sucker-punching Junior across the room was hardly a chivalrous way of fighting. Someone who fights in criminal dens like that has to expect people to fight dirty. Where I do agree with would be that Yang is overconfident, thinking that she could handle whatever tricks or attacks the opposition could throw at her.

That said, that was really the minor nitpick, I have more of a problem with the more iffy sex scene, which kinda skirts around the line between acceptable and unacceptable. Dunno, never quite liked the "her mouth says no, but her eyes say yes" sorta thing, at least not to this degree where a fight was involved previously. Dunno, it just felt very wrong-ish.

Sorry for focusing on the negative parts for so long, as I said, really enjoyed the previous two chapters and the interactions there.

Ruby and Weiss feel completely out of character here. Ruby would never be that forceful about sex, and Weiss would never let someone dominate her like that. It's incredibly too open, and honestly makes an otherwise tender and caring romance feel like an abusive one-sided power exchange. Weiss wanting to reach out to touch Ruby, and then Ruby making her keep her hands on the desk makes this feel like a bad teacher/student porno flick , with no emotion or anything behind it. Like pure smut, like you wanted to simply make this hot and sexy with no consideration for the romance behind it. It feels like you're forcing your personal fetishes on characters who otherwise would never do something like this.

Really awesome story! Really well written definitely one of the best whiterose stories I read. Please please update and add a new story soon!

GIVE US MORE WE NEED MORE
add in other teams like JNPR and CFVY.

Definitely my favorite chapter x) and not just because i'm huge bumblebee fan! I really love how you wrote Blake :3
I hope you'll write more of it!

I found it funny that Ruby actually planned all of this with the staff xD
Thanks again!