loved this story

I had to log off to leave this note because I already commented under my login so it won't let me leave another comment. I love this story so, so much and I know it must seem like a life time ago since you worked on it, but is there any possibility you would consider finishing it for those of us who absolutely love it?

SparrowHawke (Bass/Charlie)

Please Finnish this.

I can't wait for more. Thanks for writing this story

More please, I can't wait to see what's up next

More please. Thanks

please post the last 5 chapters

Please finish.

Please finish this story. Thanks

Please update, this story is my drug, I need more. :)

Please update and put the rest of the chapters on here quickly, I wanna see what happens next, I love this story so much

Please update because I can't wait to see what happens next and you haven't updated in my long time

Hey there. I just found your story today and read all 19 chapters. I like this a lot. It's great! Hope to read more soon.

I have registred here to write this: It was amazing! priceless work, I have read many charloe fan fics but this was most realistic, natural, sensative, good written, easy to read, not long, not short, not only Bass/charlie but not to much others (about that, I loved where you brought Connor, his friendship with Jason, it was so in Connors Character)
only thing what could be best is intimate scenes (and that sex was almost planed, I waited them to throw on each other after finding about each others feelings, after waiting and being afraid to be rejacted it would be so cool), it would be great it you show their feelings and thoughts about first kiss, first touch... though it is best and more critic that I can say because the story is really brilliant. you said it's becoming longer but I would be happy if it was more long, because there is no part boring, every scene is exactly as long and as deep as it should be...
is there chance that you will continue? because it will be so great, to see the groups reactions and where will go their relationships...
I must say, you developed everyone's suspicious about Charlie/Bass amazing, it is sooooo realistic and interesting... as there are many good writers in charloe fan fics they always skip that part (others reactions to Bass/Charlie), it like everyone is lazy about it, though I think it's one of most immportent part of their relationship, to skip this is like skip the whole montague capulet war in "Romeo & Juliet"
p.s. I loved who you develope their feelings, and that they are in love, not just sexual attraction, and you brought them to that "love" point so naturally :)
please continue it!

I know you haven't updated this recently, and I'm kinda hoping this is the end (don't get me wrong, can't WAIT to read more stuff from u) because its so sweet.