Reviews for THE BURNING WORLD
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17
sigo preguntando como puedo dar no me gusta
rahul kumar chapter 18 . 5/13
when will u update I have been reading this story many times in hopes for an update
Guest chapter 19 . 2/28
Goku is being potrayed accuratly in Super. But I do agree that some of his negative quirks are greatly exaggerated.. however you are taking it too far in the story un trying to outdo super Goku.. You failing in my opnion and Forgetting what Goku important.. He Is Not Hero.. However He Someone That Willing To Let Innocent Prople Get Hurt If He Happens To Be Close By.. However Goku Not Someone Who Plans To save The Day 24/7.. He is The Type Of Guy That Will Save You If 1: He Is Close By and 2: If You Really are Endanger... Goku Is A Honorable Warrior who Does His Own Thing.. Goku is Basically A Friendly Version of Akuma(Street Fighter) if You Think about it.
avjuan37 chapter 19 . 6/26/2019
please make more chapters
Guest chapter 19 . 6/9/2019
Not sure why you're keeping Goku weak.. his power has not since developed or Progressed... This Story lacks Dragonball Chracters that it is Barely Even consider a Crossover... Please Try to spice it up.. Also I barey see any Real Chemistry between Goku and Diana.. I can't even call it realistic that Goku is the one initiating the Realationship. Or the To make the First Move. I just saw you could handle e relationship better if Diana is the Show intrest after getting to Know Goku..

You're trying so hard to make up the difference that you're no better the when it comes potraying Goku.
Guest chapter 19 . 6/9/2019
I strongly recommend that you have one of the cliche at Robert David becoming the Villian. It would be waste of time abd Shown that Goku and Diana Did Not Matterv in Raising him..

In the Begining i find it weird that Diana Did Not get called Out in Leaving Goku to Die.
Drakon45 chapter 19 . 2/15/2019
This was good until you decided to nerf Goku. I didn't come here to read a nerfed hero story. Bye.
Guest chapter 19 . 12/4/2018
Please Do not make David the Villian
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 18 . 11/11/2018
DBS made Goku really really dumber than he was in DBZ. Here, his stupidity will have consequences and he will learn from them.
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 17 . 11/11/2018
Broly.*Shudders*
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 16 . 11/11/2018
Goku, you should have been sterner with David. Now I fear what consequences there will be for this.
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 15 . 11/11/2018
Oh!
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 14 . 11/11/2018
Part 2, completed.
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 13 . 11/11/2018
Part 1, completed.
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 12 . 11/11/2018
Antonis is deadly dangerous. I hope Diana and Goku are ready for an inevitable confrontation.
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