so I know you say this is complete, but it's not, why is Janivier targeting Deeks now? What is his game plan?

Awe. Good story glad it didn't end badly.

Nice story, lots of highs and lows. I sincerely hope that someday soon Callen kills Janvier.

Very interesting turn of events. Having suffered with PTSD myself, it said make you vulnerable to suggestion. The notion that Janvier could attack from prison intrigues me. It could be an addition to your story to delve into his motivations and methods.

good

Good chapter. An emotional roller coaster, but its all good in the end. Or until Jeanvier strikes again. I don't know how your muse comes up with your stories. but its absolutely brilliant.

I know you're not going to tell me, but please tell me this isn't really going to happen? I already know Janvier is coming back without reading a single spoiler they're on an arc. Not a very fluid arc, and they're playing it thin keeping it up for three seasons, especially considering it's lack of fluidity, but it is an arc.

Is this something Janvier would do? Sure. But it's a bit obvious.

Rant over, here's my thoughts. You did great. You always do great. Dialogue is one of your greatest strengths. Good job,

Great one-shot!
Janvier is just evil, evil, evil... I really don't like him!

Great story. Keep up the good work

Very nice one. Loved it

this was a brilliant and excellent story?
enjoyed the callen and deeks moment?

Way to go. Great one shot! I liked how you made use of Deeks' volunteering and Janvier gettng to one of the team from prison. Need more Deeks and Callen working together.

Wow I imagine that would be a nightmare for them all to find their partner, friend and family up on a ledge like that wanting to jump. Poor Deeks but now that he blurted out his feelings for Kenzie maybe they can hook up :D

I think you may be a bit off -

Intense. Well done nice twist. And yay a happy ending. Perfect.