Its so sad :(

Welp. Got fooled indeed XD
But still, the final chapter was a beautiful way to end this whole story. His parting words went full circle -
from when he first met her, his farewell at the mountain, and now when he met her again after he became a winter spirit. I loved the entirety of this story and as I said before, you have done a wonderful job in writing this. Kudos to you and for this lovely piece of literary art.

Why have you released the onion cutting ninjas? Why?!

I may not be a blubbering mess but I still couldn't help but cry while reading this chapter.

Jack's death was inevitable, but the way you had laid it out made things more emotional. Especially when Elsa found out about it. I knew she would blame herself for what happened.

But I was glad that at least she still visited Jack's home and brought comfort to his sister.

There's still a couple of chapters left before this ends but I'd like to say it now that you have done a wonderful job for this whole fic. I'm glad that you didn't rush things for Jack and Elsa in terms of their relationship; it makes things more sensible and well paced. I actually preferred that they didn't just declare they loved each other right away here (claiming it was love at first sight and all that) and regardless of the short amount of time they have spent together, it was clear that something had sprouted between the two. Their friendship planted a seed and gradually blossomed to something more beautiful between the two, despite that Jack passed away.

I'll end this here for now as I'm still going to read the rest of the fic, but again I commend you for the job well done for this beautiful story. Kudos!

This made me cry it broke me when he died and broke me when you made me expect that he can touch her, this broke me. I love it so much because jack fit so well in the story, i dont care if he ever did become ooc at some point but with how the story is going it didn't matter because it fits, thank yku so much!

I am glad you ended it there. It was heartfelt and cut and so far an original take on the story. Bittersweet ending but I thoughroughly enjoyed every part of it. I am definately giving the sequel a go!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoO

GURL.
WHY.

So cute at the end

OMG! I am crying so much right now! I mean, you warned us over and over that Jack was gonna die and become Jack Frost, but I'm still crying a lot! I was not prepared for this!

Hey, remember me? It was a long time ago, but I used to go by "Burning Ocean C". At least, I think that was the name I was using at he time... Well, I got a personal account since then.

I just came back because... Honestly, I've been looking for this a while. I don't read that much Jelsa anymore, what with my relatively recent obsession with anime. But I kept thinking about this story, because I think it's safe to say that this is the best Frozen and/or Rise of the Guardians fanfiction I have ever read.

Yet, I forgot the title. That's my memory for ya. So, I searched for this a while, and couldn't find it for the longest time. Just so I could add it to my favorites list.

I realize now that the comments I made less than two years ago (although it seems like a vey long time) could have been offensive or discouraging, especially with the sequel to this fanfiction. The story's amazing, and I plan on rereading this in the near future. I am so incredibly sorry, but I'd still like to thank you for writing this.

If you try hard enough, I think you'll be able to remember one of the things I loved the most about this story when I was reading it. That still stands.

Actually, the title of the sequel contributed to my new PenName.

Thank you so much for everything. For putting up with me, for writing, and for just being fantastic at this.

I hope to hear from you again.
~C

Beautiful story. By far the best Frozen and Guardians crossover I have read. You did a great job of depicting a realistic relationship within the confines of the movies. I really love that you just had them be friends with the potential for more instead of all of that love at first sight 'I can't live without you' nonsense that is so prevalent. Your writing was quite good, so you should be proud of your story! My only critique would be that you should get rid of the authors notes that spoil the ending. That would really allow the foreshadowing that you've written to shine instead of just seeming like a secondary confirmation. Let the story speak for itself. It's more than good enough.

This is an amazing story. Can't wait to read the sequel. :) Sincerely Madison aka GymnasticsRules101

You did a great job in my mind I could picture it perfectly

OMG that was really really beautiful!

Your the only writer that has my taste in jelsa story's thank YOU