| Reviews for An afternoon visit |
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  154E chapter 1 . 4/10/2017 Very good, I really like it that he's actually 13. |
 wolve lover123 chapter 1 . 11/18/2015 cute I like |
| cordell wilson chapter 1 . 2/23/2015 Cool |
| unusedaccount1337 chapter 1 . 1/16/2015 ithinkicanwrite, iknowyoucanwrite! Great! |
| Ice child chapter 1 . 5/7/2014 Mooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee |
| jarhardar290 chapter 1 . 4/22/2014 Oh man dude you gotta make more of this! LMAO |
| me chapter 1 . 2/25/2014 SQUEE! Finnceline 4eva! |
| Anon chapter 1 . 2/10/2014 Well done! Grammar was good and easy to read; the whole story flowed nicely. Looking forward to more of your work. |
| Roberto chapter 1 . 2/10/2014 Great chapter! Update soon! |
| The Nephilim King Michael chapter 1 . 2/10/2014 epic stwrt, emotion and job on chapter xD and it seems marcy started to grow feelings in finn for her x) nice |
| Neverthrive chapter 1 . 2/10/2014 I enjoyed it a fair bit, you've done a nice job. Maybe we'll see more from you in the future. |
| rams.the.boss.rm chapter 1 . 2/10/2014 Lol poor Finn. your a great writer keep up the good work :D |
| stagepageandscreen chapter 1 . 2/10/2014 Very good first attempt, and though I'm not familiar with the characters you do a good job at bringing them to life. Well done you! SPAS or Libz |
