I like it! Characters were on point and the story execution was great!

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This is awesome!
I love it!

Wow i really it so far, you really captured SPRX's anger and Antauri's way of speech even made it more interesting to have the power primate talk to them. Good Job! I update soon!

Wow! This is really interesting so far

I like how you had the Power Primate speak with Sprx at the end of the chapter, and Sprx's anger is definitely something I can see him doing...

I really really like this line here: ["Funny," SPRX growled, "I don't remember *choosing* him."] I'm not sure why it sticks out to me as much as it does, but... -shrug-

A great first two chapter! Can't wait for more Please update again as soon as you can!

Interesting start.

I like the way you describe things and I think your spelling is excellent.

However, the big blocks of text can be rather painful to the eyes to read, I suggest, after every three to five sentences, you create a new paragraph or when someone else is speaking, you create a new paragraph.

Anyway, I hope you have some success with your first story. :)

Yours Truly,
Winterbornbree