i love all of these fanfics, dont know why they were scrapped, can you put them up for adoption or tell me of any and all people who have adopted them?

I just read chapter 5 and I really enjoyed the story but it left me rather confused. It felt like 2 separate stories before and after the time skip and left me wondering when after the skip it said that he hadn’t had any contact with the fox but there are a number of points where he had met it when he was younger.

Incredibly lame. You do the typical fanon abuse of Naruto which is fine if you then have a realistic reaction to it. You don't and that's where it becomes lame. The fic starts where Naruto does stand up to it. He swears to never fight for Konoha and to leave first chance he gets. Then Naruto whose nindo is to supposedly never go back on his word gets put in ANBU with no objection on his part and becomes a good little soldier for the village. What makes this so incredibly lame is there was no point to doing the overly abused Naruto. You could have stayed with canon treatment and had him join ANBU for less overly dramatic reasons. There was no need for such a crude emotional appeal when you didn't follow through on it.

Out of all your scraps this one is by far the best and the most intriguing. I sincerely hope that you choose to actually make this scrap into a full tilt story in the future. This is one of the best story ideas I've ever read for any story and it's only in your scrap files.

I hope you do a second part to this story. I like Yukari-Naru.

Cool.

Nice.

Hm... it would be a better starting point if you combined it with the forest scene somehow. Naruto here is an OC. All character development is off-screen.
This way it's just another awesome!Naruto fic where it could have been a very interesting gender bender character growth kind of thing.

Anyway, thank you for writing,
Beyogi

I have enjoyed all of your scrapyard musings (for Naruto) I have hopes that one day you will choose to pick up the pieces of all these works again (or at least some of them) but I understand that inspiration leads where it wills.

I would have liked to see this continued if only to see what that rationale the Hokage had for forcing that particular team. Seems to me much more madness than method. If the Hokage was trying to get Naruto to bond with a team and therefore Konoha, why put him with two who are already hostile to Naruto? Why not put him on a team with at least teammates that are at least neutral towards him?

Yet another 'better than canon in every way, shape, and form' story here. Such a pity.

Mmm. You do Naruto so much better than Kishimoto did. Again, a shame that the fandom is dying the way it is, it could have been something much better than it is.

Cliche, done before, done to death, but not done *well* to death.

And this was fairly well done.

I have to agree though, I've mostly withdrawn from Naruto material as well. The series has just disintegrated, and that's had effects on the fandom.

It's trying to figure out which one though since tohonifun doesn't seem to have a cannon universe.

But I presume it was yukari vs ran?

This plot sounds all kinds of awesome.. would be nice to see more.