Reviews for A Birth of Flame and Frost
agheb chapter 11 . 8/7
Please continue with this story. It is too good to not be finished. You are an amazing write. I hope that you get the inspiration to finish it
jofig525 chapter 11 . 3/13
please update
jofig525 chapter 1 . 10/14/2019
update please
jofig525 chapter 11 . 6/12/2019
please update!
Lollyne chapter 11 . 6/10/2019
pleaseeee i need more!
Lollyne chapter 11 . 6/10/2019
for the love of odim! where are you that does not update this masterpiece !
Guest chapter 11 . 5/18/2019
I hope all is well with you and you come back to this in the future. it's the best loki and daenerys story out there.
ReaderBlack chapter 11 . 5/18/2019
Hi,

I just finished reading your story. I am now a Fan of LokixDaenerys for a couple of days now. And what i did after a watching the FMV on youtube is look for a fiction story of this two together and i stumbled upon your work. And you, lovely author, just tied me safely on a ship that i know is not possible to happen on screen. Now, i am begging..on my knees to you... Tokeep this story going until i see my two tragic characters as a couple on the iron throne with their beautiful children reigning on westeros and beyond. Please. I am aching to read more about them.

Love and support from Philippines. Kisses and hugs!
Visitor chapter 11 . 5/13/2019
FrostDragons.

They were actually cute. What’s just happened?! Why is that when there's a possibility of a crossover like this one (well, let’s consider), people just throw on some lame romance in their original plots to blow up everything? Give a bad image. And they have time for it?

Still, it would be a pleasure if your inspiration could get back for this fanfiction. It has been a really enjoyable read, and it's unique, with some new stuff thrown in. Unexpected treat! Would love to read more interactions between Loki Laufeyson with the White Walkers and their king. Loki beautifully written here, though!

Ps: *sorry if I offended anyone.
SaraIsaFrancis1 chapter 11 . 5/13/2019
How do I start this… well; Your take is imaginative, delightful, innovative. Unique ideas! Enjoyable! I loved how you added Loki teaching magic to Dana, and Thor having a hard time with the dragons was good comic relief! Your take has been one of my favourites! Loki was beautifully written here; I loved his changes of character through the story while he’s having these new experiences.

I think it’s sad that you just gave up on keeping this story up. I understand the GoT plot must be really complicated, specially because we don’t get to see more from GRR Martin (kuddos for him!). It’s a fact, his vision seems to be crucial. But it’s ok if he can’t keep up.

I would have loved to read more interactions between Loki Laufeyson with the White Walkers and their king. And see if he ended seeing himself having a relation in common with them. How he would deal with it, and if he would use his tricks.

What a surprising crossover! I loved it! And I could see this happening between LD. It’s my guilty pleasure to imagine Loki having some time to take an adventure into a different place the first time, looking for something new while space travelling. But I’m not sure if he would have remained there for her. In your story he will; but for safety, maybe he would regret, deciding to leave to not threaten the course of her life (for her best). Because their worlds don’t fit in some ways. But it's my favourite crossover by far. They would be lovely as an item, because we don’t get much stuff like this.

Disney taking over GoT is a bold move!

There’s not much I can say about. I don’t know if media could accept interactions like these in their offical works …

I hope, one day, you will come back.
Amaterasu1969 chapter 11 . 5/11/2019
Hi! I've just finished reading The Flame Maiden of Hygard, and finally caught up to this. Let me tell you, it's a very well written. A few points I'd like to point out...

Plot
You did follow the show to a certain extent, then deviated from there. Usually, I grow tired of fics that just follow the show. I find them boring. But not yours. You integrated Loki so well, everything seemed original and fresh. Kudos to that! Your own plot was quite well done, and very original. Who' have thought the Lord of Light would be a fire breathing demon? Like I said, it's quite original.

World Building
Seeing as this is fanfiction, World building is already pretty much established. You managed to add just the right amount of your own flare to keep everything new and fresh. Good job

Characters
I love how you portrayed Loki. He doesn't come across as being out character, and I can totally see him acting the way he does with Dany if he really did fall in love. Though I do wonder...Will Loki be able to harness the full power of the Mind Stone, or will you be leaving the Infinity Stones out of it? I do imagine everything will one-sided if that were the case. I doubt R'hllor can go against the power of the Infinity stones, so maybe it was a good call to leave them out of it. Hats off to you!
Daenerys was great her. So powerful yet protective and gentle. Honestly, I think you did a good job portraying her character than what D&D did to her in season 8 (which is unforgivable)
The characters are also charming. Adding Thor in was a pretty good call, and I just about squealed when Loki's last thought at the end of the Flame Maiden was "Hello Brother.." Will more Asgardians be entering into the fray? Will Odin make an appearance in Hygard? (Though I pretty much imagine that would tip the scales too much)

I can't wait to see where you take this story, especially with that cliffhanger! It's been a while since you updated, and I we each have our priorities in life. I myself havent updated in ages, but I do intend to finish my story. I hope you do, too! It would be a shame to leave this gem unfinished.

All the best!
A1969
Amaterasu1969 chapter 1 . 5/11/2019
Hi! I've just finished reading The Flame Maiden of Hygard, and finally caught up to this. Let me tell you, it's a very well written. A few points I'd like to point out...

Plot
You did follow the show to a certain extent, then deviated from there. Usually, I grow tired of fics that just follow the show. I find them boring. But not yours. You integrated Loki so well, everything seemed original and fresh. Kudos to that! Your own plot was quite well done, and very original. Who' have thought the Lord of Light would be a fire breathing demon? Like I said, it's quite original.

World Building
Seeing as this is fanfiction, World building is already pretty much established. You managed to add just the right amount of your own flare to keep everything new and fresh. Good job

Characters
I love how you portrayed Loki. He doesn't come across as being out character, and I can totally see him acting the way he does with Dany if he really did fall in love. Though I do wonder...Will Loki be able to harness the full power of the Mind Stone, or will you be leaving the Infinity Stones out of it? I do imagine everything will one-sided if that were the case. I doubt R'hllor can go against the power of the Infinity stones, so maybe it was a good call to leave them out of it. Hats off to you!
Daenerys was great her. So powerful yet protective and gentle. Honestly, I think you did a good job portraying her character than what D&D did to her in season 8 (which is unforgivable)
The characters are also charming. Adding Thor in was a pretty good call, and I just about squealed when Loki's last thought at the end of the Flame Maiden was "Hello Brother.." Will more Asgardians be entering into the fray? Will Odin make an appearance in Hygard? (Though I pretty much imagine that would tip the scales too much)

I can't wait to see where you take this story, especially with that cliffhanger! It's been a while since you updated, and I we each have our priorities in life. I myself havent updated in ages, but I do intend to finish my story. I hope you do, too! It would be a shame to leave this gem unfinished.

All the best!
A1969
Guest chapter 11 . 2/5/2019
This is getting so much better than it already is...and
so unfair you decide to stop writing it...
I wasnt too thrilled with Loki/daenerys pairing in the beginning but after reading your story, i was pleasantly surprised how awesome a story you wrote. Hope you return to finish this story...too good for it to be unfinished.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/4/2019
I dont understand how daenerys thought she would come to dragonstone on her own and not be in a battle of sone kind. Also, where are all of stannis' soldiers? This is really sort of strange. Yes, shes stubborn but not stupid. Why she insisted on coming here on her own, im not sure at all.
fallenangels1234 chapter 1 . 12/2/2017
love the story, hope you update soon
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