This a good story that I think it should be in the movie and this is my real name

This story is absolutely one of the best a&o stories out there. I had to read it multiple times, I think im at 8 times so far.

Had to read it again mate. Exellent.

One more thing, if you are still active with Fanfiction, PLEASE write more A&O stories. This story is absolutely amazing and i wish all of these 2K A&O stories could be as good as this one. You inspired me into writing and i dont care if people think i cant write. I really do wish to see more A&O stories from you.

This story is absolutly amazing. This truley is the best alpha and omega story ever to exist! Hell it may even be better then the movie

(Samel person as below) Once again i want to say this story is the best. It made me cry when i finished and wished it would never end. Once again i love the detail and the use of words. And this story beats any love story by light years to me. This story was so good i had to stop what i was doing and make this second comment.

This literally was THE BEST story i have EVER heard in my ENTIRE life. The detail and use of words made me feel as if i was there. In my opinion, this story is better then the movie itself. If this was an essay, it would graded 1000000 out of 100. You are an exellent story writer. I hope to see more of your writing in the future. Dont stop writing even if its mot your dream. You are the best story writer EVER.

This is a beautiful sorry mate. Good job. I love how the vivid language and exuberant emotions you brought out show such great attention to detail. The language of love is a confusing one, but it seems you have mastered it well. Good job.

that was the best story I ever heard in life

This story is so amazing. Im so sad and so touched. I love it

Love it so far

Amazing

This story was flawless and I absolutely injoyed reading it. You should continue this with a sequel, I'm sure everyone will love it if you do. Anyways I can't get over the fact on how good this story turned out. It's like I have to read more but there is no more to read. I should stop rambling great job and I hope you do a sequel to this one again great job.

Oh mah ferkin' gerd dude!

This story was absolutely brilliant. I loved every single aspect from the detail, to the events, to the emotion... everything. There were some tear-jerkers, some things that the reader mad at a character or two, and some things that brought a huge smile to my face particularly. Like... I never ever get mushy and I've never used this word before. But the ending is so freaking... 'cute' and 'sweet'. XD Like, it was awesome man.

But the entire story was wonderful, mate. Keep up the excellent work on your future projects, and I would definitely love to see more stuff like this. But of course I'd like to see the remainder of that vast field of creativity you've got stored up there. So... yeah.

(Like... I still can't get over the ending. Lol. But the whole fanfic was amazing and I'm happy that you stuck it out. As I'm sure the others are too.)

But yeah, I can't wait to see whatever else you've got to write/type. Keep up the incredible work, comrade. Until next time. -Whiskey

This story was really well thought out and it brought on the struggles of life that are both physical and emotional. I could not see any spelling errors and the characters seem like they are real. So to sum it all up I just wanted to tell you that I liked your story a lot.