| Reviews for Aide Of the Primordials: Book 1 |
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   Jai Rednibr chapter 1 . 12/6/2014 I like this story bro. wanna play minecraft? I can make a server on what ever version you want |
| Snow Wolfe6631 chapter 13 . 7/30/2014 Great chapter! Only thing I noticed was that Chaos was a male then a female. Is that one of her creator powers? Keep up the good work! |
| Snow Wolfe6631 chapter 10 . 7/30/2014 I'm finally getting caught up on this story. Its really good. I love the can't use the power thing. It balances out Nexus' powers quite nicely. One major thing I see that you could is the way you introduced the characters. While having Nexus get a mission to rescue a character is a great idea, copying and pasting the form in surely isn't the bet way to do it. I'm not putting down the having the description, just... Ah, I'm bad at explaining things. I hope you get what I'm trying to say. Good chapter! |
| Izzybella12 chapter 13 . 6/27/2014 Super awesome! Can't wait to read book 2! :) |
| demigodVixen chapter 13 . 5/9/2014 Besides a few others so I dont get killed by Titan wolf , this is one of my fravort AUs and I love this story |
| YellowLambo chapter 12 . 4/30/2014 Story Awesome! Update as soon as can! |
| TheBlueTear chapter 12 . 4/28/2014 Really good so far :D |
| Llew444 chapter 10 . 4/22/2014 heh awesome as always |
| Snow Wolfe6631 chapter 9 . 4/21/2014 Hmmmm, it will be hard for Nexus to fight Gaea. Maybe you could throw in a flashback of the two together. |
| Snow Wolfe6631 chapter 8 . 4/21/2014 I thought Nexus would have had a different way with Gladiola, but I liked the way it worked out. |
| Snow Wolfe6631 chapter 7 . 4/21/2014 Wow, that was amazing that you put it up! |
| Tyrano chapter 7 . 4/5/2014 I posted a link aswell. I hope the bullies now what they caused. |
| LittleNoodleSoup chapter 7 . 4/4/2014 Where is the link |
| Llew444 chapter 4 . 4/1/2014 mistake switch Hades with Erburus Strengts Can throw his daggers far. good arm muscles. tatical weaknesses quick to anger. fatal flaw grudges/revenge love? idk u do that relationships no very good around people. doesn't talk much. anti social tgere we go |
| Llew444 chapter 5 . 4/1/2014 awesome! ocs? Name Llewelyn Nick/likes to be known by Cluthu (say cl-u-thoo ) Apperance emo looking . brown ans green eyes. Black hair Son of Hades Personality Quick to anger. Weapon Sygitan iron sword and two daggers Possibly fights them in the underworld is shunnded and ignored by Hades and the gods lives in the underworld soo yeah...do what else you want to do with him awesome |
