It's so angsty.

But that's just what I love.

Short and sweet, filled with meaning.

Any chance for this to continue? What is planed a good old timetravel / dimensiontravel story where Harry is reunited with at least a Version of his love?

It could also be a story where Fawkes transforms Hermione into a parthuman (happens to Harry a lot but seldom to anyone else). But with the war over that would be quiet short (unless you combine it with a travel story).

an excellent but sad start

Don't know exactly where you are going but I like it. snowball

Oh wow...au gotta love it...great but sad story so far but you left yourself and out...definitely would like to see this continued...

Time travel? Healing Hermione? Alt U? the possibilities are limitless for where this can go!

Not really but limitless sounds better then me guessing random numbers.

Love your first chapter and look forward to reading what happens next in your story.

great start cant wait for next chapter

Good dramatic and heart-wrenching start! Now to turn back time (Love the Cher song!) and see where he ends up and whom will help in his quest!

dennisud