awww i totally wanted more

I finished reading your story and thought this was an amazingly well written fanfic! U captured all their personalities and brought them alive with your clever plot! Quite an F4 x Tsukushi story :P I love the entire story; really interesting and sweet to see the flower boys interact with tsukushi!

poor tsukasa!
when i started to read the hyd manga, one thing what always was killing me is the stubborn of the tsukushi...
and now once again...

but i have to say i love your fic.
hope to read MORE!

you are such a good writer!

you are really good at describing the scene of psycho!
you portray every characters so real and so good!
for example :
He surged free of his captors, and, in a storm of ferocious anger, forced his way across the crowded floor. Behind him, he left a number of the hapless dancers in his path strewn about the floor nursing their bruises, not knowing quite what had hit them with such force.
(i really love it!)

and not to mention the other fantastic scenes you wrote!

when you torturing tsukasa, and you are also torturing yor reader. haha(you can take this as a compliment.)

soujiro ... i am spechless...

the word come out from tsukushi about judging soujiro is so precise!
the kissing is awkward. but the takling take place at the dancing place is perfect!

rui is a baka!
why rui had to kiss domyoji's girl tsukushi!
0 no way!
tsukasa please come up soon!

by the way. thouth rui's kiss made me mad, i still really love your fic! bravo! lol

ah i come back and reviews after reading chapter8.
chapter3 is also interesting.

oh!
i was mad at tsukushi's reaction to rui's kiss!
my poor tsukasa! what will he do next,tearing rui into pieces or what?
i love your story!haha
so interesting! lol

I love the beginning!
it was so funny and did make me laugh!
domyoji tsukasa is totally a
but i love that idiot!

Ah the stupidity of Tsukasa reaches new heights in your story. I humerous bit of nonsense. I enjoyed the tale.

I didnt know there were 2 sequals!Yeah!

AH!I love this story so much, whats his name is starting to like her that um N guy(forgot his full name)!And Rui, I have always loved Rui and I had always hoped that Makino and him would end up together leaving Tsukasa alone just like Lei was!Maybe the story would start to heat up if all the f4 fell for her and this huge battle began! I think that im getting too carried away though,but It would be nice if that N guy started to like her while Rui loved her so,so much(just like shizuka but more) and Tsukasa loved her hella(not willing to let her go). And that Akira well something could happen to him, maybe if he liked Makino(there I go again getting carried away, but hey it could happen)!Its your story though,5/5!keep writing this one pleze i so like this one I was up for like 1 hour or 30 minutes reading it(i think)!

That was really good! You have a great feel for the characters in your writing. I really liked what you did with Soujiro and Makino - it was cute. You also handled Rui really nicely. I'd definitely read more Rui fics if you write them!

i luv ur storie really good writer!

God I hate Umi. I hate her so much I wish she'd just die.