Reviews for Immature |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Short and cute, I like it ** |
![]() ![]() Den, aprovechado XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was v cute :) |
![]() ![]() Awww, this was cuuute Great writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, it's so sweet! I'm quite a fan of DenNor and HongIce myself and you capture their dynamics well. I also really like your portray of China; even though his part was kinda brief, he totally sounds like one old and wise. |
![]() ![]() oh my gosh! Once again, it was perfect! . |
![]() ![]() That was fluffy, and cute. I really liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cute! You did well with the flow of the story (I love where Denmark and Norway squabble) and there are very few grammar/spelling mistakes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! Cute! |