U did amazing

This is too cute. You must be the God of RWBY romance.

I liked it. I thought it was pretty good most of the time, although it felt pretty unnecessarily awkward with jaune and Blake, I felt like there could’ve been something that you could do.

OMG! Please write another one. It was actually a plot twist when none of the other RWBY Girls didn't say anything and I never suspected Weiss or the Ice Queen of all people to be the one who wrote it. Even now that I finished reading it that I get the clues to the love letter (If i'm right) Weiss writes perfect, she's on of those type of girls to scent items that are really important too and I should've known when she "Volunteered" to go with Jaune to help him on meeting his secret admirer. Please if you can, I would love to see more of this. Am not that much of a JaunexWeiss fan, they're maybe in my top 10 at #7 favourite ship, but this one is too cute and adorable and it fits both of the characters nicely. Again please continue on with this Fanfic. 3

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooookay, I don't know about the references since I wasn't reading RWBY when this story was out, so I can't exactly notice the references...except maybe for that Faunus In Heat and the multiple personalities part. Those were a bit obvious. : D

The story itself? Excellent. It had me wondering who could've been the one to write that letter to Jaune by the start... but then... uh, this is probably something I should say in the chat? Nah, see, the story was great, good grammar, good use of the genres, good characterization, good pacing, etc. Really something that I can believe it came from you, man. Then again, you have to admit that when you started explaining Weiss' newfound friendship with Jaune over the years... that kind of gave it away.

Still great tho!

But why no Pyrrha!? Are you joining the Gingericide, my man!? Are you abandoning ship!? ...well, the ship kinda of crashed...and was shot with an arrow...and then disintegrated, only leaving the flag to remember the ship by. Worse of all, the captain was planning it all along! Damn you, captain! Last time I semi-trust a person with authority! : I

Whatever. Cool story bro. Made my day after so many depressive stories in this site. Why the need for so much drama? Or am I perhaps looking in the wrong places? Meh.
Write that Pyrrha one-shot, I think it's been high time for it.
Saludos.

This was a fun little one shot...

Keep up the good work.

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I'm so glad you made this, there aren't enough Empire fanfics on this site.

the "buy me a dog" line now holds new meaning wiht Zwei in the show.

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That has to be one of the cutest endings I've ever read, good job on this wonderful story.

I came in expecting a cheap, clumsily written fic. Instead I got feels.

Damn, that is THE most human Jaune I have ever read. I'm keeping my eyes on you. Excellent work, hope to hear more from you.

I like it, it fits into the series very nicely and is well written.

Well that was a very pleasant read. Very funny, I almost lost my shit when Blake said Li'l Jaune was impressive, too funny man, too funny.
And that brings me to the point that I couldn't help but notice you reference my fic very cheekily, and had me smiling from ear to ear. That was good.
You handled this fic very well, and I think the two and others don't act as OOC as you think. Over time, I can see this happening.
I would love to see alternate versions and follow-ups with Blake - if you will, 'cause she's my fav if you couldn't tell - and look forward to more writings of yours.
Good luck to you.

I didn't find all of them but I found some of them... and it twas glorious. :3
It'd be totally awesome if you made some alternate endings for this with other pairings.
Good stuff, I liked it, stay awesome, and stay classy folks.

That was cute. I liked it.