Oh I hate that trope of kunoichi seduction missions. Probably true, but it hate it.

Ah never mind. Though it seems unlikely they will assign such a mission to a child.

What was the point of ostracizing her? I don't get it.

Sorry. I won't be able to stomach the T&I stuff. You are doing a great job though. Just finding it hard to digest is àll.

-omg i'm born in the naruto world i just realized that they're producing child soldiers on a daily basis, i need to learn how to survive
several months later: fuck my old parents this is my new family which i will protect with my life. who gives a shit about surviving

Oh man, poor Yoda. He doesn't understand what he feels, knows that fact, can't help feeling it anyway. He's really becoming a tragic figure (ironically) simply because we can empathize with what he wants but, like him, know it can't be. Very much the Arthurian/French 'courtly love' nonsense.

I think Yoda's description of Danzo is dead accurate. A bitter old man who hates having lost power. An agent on his side keeps a useful asset and he regrets it? That's level of destructive 'If I can't be happy no one should be happy' that very much makes sense of his stupidity in canon and here.

That's something I like here that Naruto didn't use enough. It's that one thing you didn't know existed that your opponent has that should, by all rights, be the death of most truly capable shinobi. Especially those that can do medical techniques. (the alternatives are sheer numbers and/or chakra exhaustion.) I have to admit that I honestly considered Nanami dying or being crippled for life, having to fight a combat nightmare like Kabuto alone. I'm glad to be proven not as clever as I'd like to think I am once again by a good writer.

Hi, silent reader here! I followed your story few years ago and I reread it again lately. I really missed Nana’s chaotic tale. I think what makes your story unique is the fact that your oc is a Byakugan - less Hyuuga. And the Uchiha clan lives? That’s interesting to me. Funny how politics work that way. I really really like Nanami’s friendship with Shikamaru. It’s very heartwarming. The fight with Neji was due to happen. It doesn’t feel forced. The tension you created between the siblings was believable.
The only thing I’m curious about is Nanami’s induction to the T&I, it feels like it came out of nowhere. But I do see her talent is useful there.
Overall, I really like your story and your oc! I think she’s refreshing. Her humour is entertaining. I’m excited to see how you will develop the story. Keep it up!

y do they dislike the oc? at least shes not op unlike other fanfics

shiz i love how cool the oc is :3 she killed kabuto with 1000 iq

ill predict its either itachi/sasuke, since theres no massacre :/

Hey There! I'm really enjoying this story and I see it's been a long time since you updated. Just wondering, would you be willing to post an abbreviated synopsis of the remaining plotline? No probs if not. Thank you!

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Ahh this was such a good read! I really hope you decide to continue it 3

please update again soon!