Excellent!

A little fast but I like ot

Love this so far. Loki and Viserys actually look so much alike.

Well I like it :D eventhough you only repeated dialogues from the movie and the TVshow. The dialogues you wrote yourself are way better! Be confident. Like I said I like it :)

I like ur loki story but the chapters seem a bit short.

I am honestly in love with this book. I thinks it's incredible, it's very romantic. I wish this book became a movie or a short film in some way. Please write more chapters.

Ugh. It's one thing to place Asgard in the Game of Thrones world. It's another thing entirely to make them the Dothraki. That just seems like an excuse to be lazy and rewrite most of the story from the show. I hope you've written some significant difference between them because the Dothraki can hardly be considered a Kingdom.

Ok please don't hate me but no, just no. The writing is good and the story line is ok but it seems like you are just switching out Drogo with Loki and it doesn't flow. The two of them are very different in character and background and the change just doesn't work that well. Again, please don't hate.

honestly great idea but the writing is VERY choppy

This is honestly a really awesome story, I ship Lokerys so hard and this makes my feels explode

I knew this would be a good ship - and a great fic - from the very beginning. Please update again soon!

Poor unborn baby. Please keep up the good work.

I like this story :) And I am glad you did not kill off Loki. Are you going to incorporate the storyline of Thor into this as well? Please update soon!

Awwwwwww thats so sweet, gr8 chapter plz update soon
: )

Gr8 chapter plz update soon : )