Beautiful! It feels just like a deleted scene.

Whew so much hurt and emotion! Excellent writing! Totally wish something like this happened in the episode. It was perfectly characterized!

This was really, really good! You have such a gift, please write more!

Awesome! I love it!

I was so surprised to see your story. I haven't visited this site often. I enjoyed what you did with Beth and Daryl - it would have been so easy to take them down another path. Easy, but not necessarily true to their characters.

Love it xx. Lovely story