Reviews for Home |
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Cococauldroncakes chapter 1 . 4/21 This is very well written |
halfravenhalfclaw chapter 1 . 10/7/2018 Ahhhhhh this story is cute and well written and wolfstar... just my cup of tea |
abandonedfanfiction chapter 1 . 7/14/2017 This was so heartbreaking and sweet all at once! I wanted to cuddle Remus so bad, and then Sirius beat me to it. I wanted to kiss Remus, and Sirius beat me to it ;). I tease. But it's such a wonderful piece, the feelings were so raw and the letter was so hard to take! Love their kiss! So sweet! |
bellancy chapter 1 . 1/31/2017 That was cute as pie! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2017 so sweet |
LJ Summers chapter 1 . 8/21/2015 This was so sad, sweet, and perfect. :) |
Citty L. Summer chapter 1 . 1/6/2015 Your home's wherever you make it ... aww, that was so sweet! I really enjoyed this one-shot. Not only did you start with a strong beginning to set up the scene, but the middle/conversation was spot on and then the ending topped it all. These kind of stories make me fall in love with the Marauder Era over and over again ; D Little nitpicking at the end: Typo in the sentence about Remus' father not taking shit from anyone (he - his) and I'm not entirely sure but I'd probably change the tense in the last sentence (is - was). Very well written story! Thanks for sharing and making me want to go write Remus/Sirius now ;D |
Gleas chapter 1 . 3/8/2014 Aww... |
I am the Color of Boom chapter 1 . 2/27/2014 Awwwwww! This was adorably sweet! You need to shoot me now, because I'm dying here of the cuteness. Ahaha! Sirius was so sweet and thoughtful, and Remus was so cheered up. Aghhh. I really liked this. Sirius was trying so hard! Toooo cute! Okay. Okay. You should write more one-shots. Siriusly. Hehe |
FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 1 . 2/20/2014 Why are slash fics so darn adorable. |
Hopeful Rays chapter 1 . 2/19/2014 This was the sweetest thing ever, I loved it. Very well done. :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2014 HSJALFOAJFÄFPHFP LOVE IT OH MY GOS SO PERFECT I'M CRYING OH GOD |
NeonDomino chapter 1 . 2/19/2014 Awww this is such a nice story (well apart from what Remus' parents are doing to him). Remus' parents should support him no matter what, it's not Remus' fault, and they shouldn't send that letter, knowing how their son would take it. At least the Potters care, as they are willing to take him in, and at least something good came out of it, as Sirius admitted his feelings. Another great story. Great writing :) |