I really hope you are still writing this because I lovr the intro and would love to see more.

Really intriguing. So far, in just this first chapter I have really enjoyed the way you write - your prose and language.
Harry's speech was well crafted, and well suited to him - I think you've got a real handle on his personality so far.

I'm really interested in seeing where this will go. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow, this is intense. Let's see how it goes. Harry will learn how to love with his parents, I can't help anxiously waiting to see it!

I like the chapter

Hmmmmmm, sounds like an interesting/original take on the "Go back & redo life" story.
I'll add this to my story alerts.