My only critic is that the Brachial artery is in the upper arm. The radial and ulnar arteries are in the forearm.

stupid invisible ninjas with their stupid invisible onions

wah I cried again

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I actually cried on this chapter

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HOW DARE YOU WRITE THIS STORY! MY TEARS ARE GOING! MY HEART IS POUNDING AND I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! You know, one of those love/hate relationships with a fic. EEEEEEEEEEEE

I love this! I kinda wish there was more Snape character development (I know you haven't listed him as a character of course!) but still love it!

THANK YOU!

Thank you.

Loved it

In my opinion, it takes a great writer to capture so much in such a short chapter. It was a beautiful and sad and tear jerking and heart wrenching chapter that made me want to cry. All in all, it was a wonderful chapter. Bravo.

I loved the ending of this chapter. Life was good... until it wasn't. Such a fantastic ending to the chapter. And the part where James says a cigarette is smoky... oh my gosh, hilarious.

It's number 12 not 13

Pleaseeeee update! I'll be so sad if you don't. I will become dperesses! You don't want me to end up like Sirius right?

THIS IS SO FREAKING FANTASTIC ID LOVE IF YOU UPDATE! But I do think that it was quite a good place to end FOR NOW as it was pretty happy ;) honestly loved it so much

...you ever gonna update this?