Awesome story! I enjoyed it, good job

This was very well written and nearly had me in tears, despite being not very familiar with the fandom. You did awesome at defining the relationship between the brothers. Great job!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *sobbbs* You-can't-! BEEEENNNNN!
Why, Boa, why?

I really liked how you wrote the relationship between Ben and Miles here, loved this story.