I have to say it: every quote was perfect.
And the whole story is so amazing. Thank you. You did a great thing here. One of the best ones I've e ver read. Loved the characters. Felt what they felt. And I did guess about the son.
Thank you.

Well you had me in tears thanks for the read

So... Im pretty sure you are already aware of it but you do know that this is almost the exact same storyline that was used in the episodes "Lauren" and "Valhalla" of Criminal Minds, right?

Oh my god, you have taken me on such a rollercoaster! I actually cried when Lisbon 'died'... (Embarrassing, but it's late at night and I'm tired...) but I loved this so much! Please please please update it! I need a ton of Lisbon fluff to undo the tension of her almost death!

What a beautiful story and great plot! Loved it!

Criminal minds mentalist style. This bares remarkable resembelance to the doyle/prentiss/lauren storyline and i am really enjoying it.

Amazing story! I really truly enjoy reading it! I will wait impatienly for an update! I love how you portait Lisbon and Jane in each chapter, showing their strenght but weakness also. They might have doubt but never lost their faith in each other. Can't wait to see them in love openly! Great job!

Such a wonderful story I loved every chapter great work and peace out.

That was a charming, touching chapter. I'm surprised that Lisbon didn't freak out even more, but her changing moods, guilt and depression felt very realistic. I really enjoy reading Jane being the strong one helping Lisbon for a change and the scene at the willow tree was lovely. You write the dialogue between them and their thoughts very well. Also I'm very curious to know what Pike said to Jane at the funeral now :) Thanks for writing- I still can't believe this is your first fanfic and English is not your first language- I'm very impressed.

Great story. Can't wait for more!

Yes, Lisbon lived. Didn't expect Ireland, though. The symmetry and symbolism of them burying their rings were lovely, as is them coming together. Should be more sympathetic to Pike's plight, but he was never more than a catalyst for Lisbon and Jane. Looking forward to that stuff to be dealt with.

Really enjoyed this - read it through from start to finish

This is powerful stuff - it is gripping

Great chapter, you know how excited I am when a new chapter for this story pops up as an alert. And to bring them to Ireland, well of course I have to love that. Beautiful scene around the willow tree, very touching.

Woooow I can just say Wow to this chapter!