Look, humanity, I know you're fucking paranoid, but maybe, just maybe, not everything in space has to deal with the Combine.

Hello! If you are reading these reviews to tell whether the fic is good or not you should know that this fic is in the realm of "so bad it's good". To copy and paste my review from SpaceBattles (on the worst fanfics of all time thread).
"Instead of going after Half-Life this fic intends to go after Mass Effect. The plot in a nutshell is that a human/vortigaunt/Aperture alliance thinks that the Citadel are Combine so they start committing war atrocities that would make Vlad Tepes shocked. This goes up to the point where they completely destroy the Turian homeworld. It's bad and you should read it. This fic falls into the "so bad it is good" territory for me and I kept reading to see the stupidity that came next. It also has some great ideas that could be explored (tell me if I should explain on this point more). It's one of the worst, but it is good to look at for a laugh or to get some ideas for a Half-Life/Mass Effect fic."
If you are planning on writing a fanfic for writing a Mass Effect story I recommend reading this for a lesson on what NOT to do when writing these crossover fics. Surprisingly this isn't my most disliked Mass Effect & Half Life crossover. Even though it was bad I still enjoyed reading it.

İnstead of invading all planets of Turians just occupy one capture some prisoners make experiments on them so that Coalition can realize they are not Combine like I said this story has a lot of potential but needs to rewrite after chapter 4

This story has a lot of potential but I think you need to rewrite it after chapter please keep the experiments those parts were amazing

an interesting story, a bit brutal, but interesting nonetheless. i hope you will continue it.

Jeez get a load of all these buttblasted reviews. There are tons of other fics where humanity is the good little goy that will lick the boots of the Council, so just go and read that instead of crying endlessy "Hoomans bad!" . I personally love this story and its unexpected turns, and Im sad that this is apparently dead.

So Glados basically just saved multiple civilisations.. and she doesn't even care. Love it.

Wow, the Coalition sure isn't pulling their punches. Poor Citidal races, they don't stand a chance haha.

Damn son, I love this fusion fic. :D

This is quite good, there are a few spelling errors, but nothing too excessive, Great story so far, and I can't wait for more!

I know it was abandoned in 2015 but I really need to comment. Everyone in the story is a dangerous idiotic fanatic. I wouldn't be surprised if the humans destroyed themselves because they thought they were all Combines.

Clap Clap Clap , well bravo bravo in spite of you will try to make an Humanity OP you seem to forgot we didn't know nothing of the combine and what of their level of technology neither how powerful theirs ships really are . Don't forget they have tend to blitzkrieg unprepared civilizations . Why do you make Humanity so horribly stupid and MONSTRUOUS ? They attack an fleet of ship with inferior technology and they have still thought they were combine . WOW just WOW ,when you encounter people you didn't know and seem to be less technological in advance you don't shoot . They even create experimental test on living,conscious subject (Are they Nazis , so that mean they have becoming as horrible and evil as the Combine and dare to say theirs morals when they did this ) . WOW just an fan fiction who consist wanking HUMANITY and saying they are nice and martyrised when they killed an entire planet .
YOU HAVE THE POTENTIAL TO MAKE THE THING BETTER.

awesome mayn

Yea this coalition is pure evil if we so much as think your a combine we will destroy everything you have. WTF

Thank you for the cheese cake and how retarded and mentally inept are the humans?! To think the combine would send small fry through a relay when the combine would have better ships? THATS JUST FauCKING STtUupid!