SO... PRECIOUS... I... NEED MORE!

not bad but you had sasuke being nice and then bashing , you had naruto use rasengan against sasuke AND THEN learn it LATER from jiraya and finally sasuke would never say steal a jutsu as that would degrade the uchia name (as is calling orochimaru father)

I can't wait for you to update this

Hope to read more soon.

D

Liked the story especially the interaction between naruto and gaara. Liked how each character was portrayed. Looking forward to reading more

That is like so straight forward!
Damn. Naruto is a womanizer?!
0O0

Damn! I hope you updae soon so i can read more of this cute story and a female Gaara is just awesome! What does she look like as a female does she have long or short hair and does she wear make-up? Have a wonderful day/night!

Update soon :)

You don' t use any puncuation, do you?

Actually a decent story, do update.

good start, hope you find insperation soon

Hey... do you need a Beta?
I can help you and possible talk you out of your writers block, never had one, so maybe I can influence you :P :)

:D Blushing Gaara-Chan!

So heres my thoughts so far
1-You have a good idea here, it seems cute and like something I would read in my freetime.
2-It feels like you rushed a bit. Lots of spelling errors and general grammar mistakes.
3-The chapters are a bit short.

So just get a beta reader either here or a friend irl and you should be good, I hope to see more.
-Sickness

Terrrible