Take your time if you wish to continue writing. I can assure you this is being read. :)

Please continue this. I want to see what happen's next.

Nice story! And I really do see the potential in a shipping, since both Fin and Samantha are great warriors.

keep it up this is just getting good

I really don't mind the concept of this story.

It's well written and has solid potential. I would like to see you continue it.