Woah that was quite a hot fanfic and very tastefully done.

I have a challenge, and I know you guys are KAEXers and all that, but how about Lance and a woman, any woman.

Here are the criteria:

She could be a Princess, and as stubborn and temperamental as Allura and Romelle.

Hates evil, of course.

No blondes, there are too many of them. She mustn't have blue eyes, either. Green, silver or brown eyes are a must, though violet eyes are acceptable.

One other thing, she cannot be some shrinking violet, a-la Jeannie Stone from 'Streets of San Francisco' or Elizabeth Turner from 'Pirates Of The Caribbean', look who they fell in love with {Steve Keller and Will Turner}

okay, version one had me blushing at the thought of laundry..

now, you've gone and revised it even hotter.. I think I'll be blushing at just the thought of doing laundry..

great story.. I am in awe of your talent..

WAIT! WHAT? TWO VERSIONS?! (yes, all shouty caps!) Cos, i just indulged on the first version, and here you go uploading a HOTTER version? I am soooo melting now. (dreamy eyes)

Yup, I like version two better. Especially the part you've added that Keith was looking for Allura everywhere. (Of course he'd look for her after the barage of alarms and deluge!)

Damn... um... that was better than the real thing! I might just have to start smoking after that. I am SO thrilled that one of my absolute favorite KA writers (*bows to your genius*) has taken up this challenge. A challenge that started out as a joke when I was first discussing it with Cubbie in a really weird discussion. (I love our lil' discussions... love to have you join in too... that would be AWESOME) Anyhow, I was having a serious bout of writer's block and figured what the hell. So, now, that both YOU and Mertz have both set the bar so freakin' high, *sighs* I think my mojo has started returning. THANK YOU! You have ALWAYS inspired me when I write KA. In fact, your stories were what motivated me to start writing KA again in the first place. I wish I had a solid gold bottle of laundry detergent to give you as a trophy... LOVE your writing... your style and your choice in material!

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Aligator

Awesome story!