Finally got around to finish reading this. Good lead up to the next book.

Do I need to read the rewrite to understand what happens when the plot moves forward again? I don't usually remember the finer details at the best of times, so a few changed or missing chapters won't matter to me.

wow
I wish you could do more. I understand you've got a lot going on. I hope you finish this story another time!

Hmm. This was interesting. Seriously, I'm so excited for book two!

Whoa. That was different. Good different, but pretty scary and unexpected. Link gets smacked around more than I expected. This chapter did seem a bit rushed, but I understand the excitement of the finish! Nice job! I'll keep an eye out for the rewrite, plus book two! I'm so excited for the next installment!

Ahhhaa! The Resistance begins to move, its also nice to see Auru in this chapter By the way you had my jaw on the floor with that last chapter, you wrote that out beautifully! Are you gonna start the next part off with them in Hyrule field trying to reach the castle or start with the Resistance again

Your writing is amazing! This chapter was beautifully done!
As a fellow writer, your work and detail is perfection! Thank you so much for this FanFiction.

... wow did that have to rhyme? Geez.

Awesome! A little different than what I expected, but an epic battle. I like how you show Midna's difficulty in containing the power of the Fused Shadows, the only time you see that lack of control is after you defeat Zant in the game. And she didnt have all the pieces yet and she was struggling. Poor Link though, I dont think Renado will have to do much to keep Link down while he recovers. Bronchitis, pneumonia, or any lung infection takes forever to get rid of, and that's not including his other injuries. I would have think he would have cracked or bruised a rib being thrown around like he was.

I'm surprised they had enough oxygen for 6 days in that cave. That battle was something else, entirely. Midna is dangerous.

That chapter was amazing! So intense and exciting! I've been waiting for this chapter for ages! Thanks so much for the update. I personally think that you've found a really great balance of detail and action, and I love it. It actually reminds me a bit of The Hobbit; interesting description and detail, but also movement.
I like that Link is so human (Hylian, hehehee), because spending so long in all these freaky temples can't be very healthy. It's very believable and real. Also Midna. Tons of snarky fun and great character buildup and growth. I love both of them.
I can't believe that cliffie you left. That was evil :D so exciting! It makes me even more excited for the next chapter.

another fantastic chapter, the wait was long, but worth it. I do not at all agree with Ron obvious, I love the detailed descriptions of all the things in your book. Then again, I love detail in everything. I adore your writing style, and I will wait patiently for the next chapter.

It seems to me that far too much realism has been injected into this part of the story. So much so that is it actively getting in the way of the story actually progressing. I didn't come here to read about the pitfalls of deep sea diving; I came here to read a Legend of Zelda story. The Zora suit is obviously meant to be magical. It protects the wearer from these effects through magic, end of story. The longer this went on, the more incredulously disinterested I became. An effective writer must learn to conserve detail and only go into things that are actually important to plot and character, not waste time with inane meandering on things that are entirely out of place from the setting and are not justified by the source material.

Hello! I just wanted to say that you are such a great writer! I love your descriptions and details and storyline and stuff. This is one of the greatest stories I have ever read. Thanks for sharing your story with us! Keep it up!

Odd as it may sound, I actually really love the Lakebed Temple. The game's portrayal of it as some sort of abandoned underwater palace always made it seem so pretty but eerie.
And though your portrayal of it is much different, with hints of the Great Bay Temple thrown in there, it is still a fascinating place to experience. Something otherworldly and full of dread despite its beauty.
I hope that you do eventually explain the presence of the Sol! It was an interesting inclusion.
Lastly, will the clawshot make an appearance? It (along with the Double Clawshot) is my favorite item to use in TP, so I'd love to see your take on it.
Looking forward to the next chapter, as always. Actually, looking forward to the next chapter in particular, if things continue at this pace. I've been waiting for your version of it since I began following this story.
Hope you are doing well!
-Akira

Awesome! Its great to hear from you again! Considering the fact it wasn't in the game I never considered decompression sickness, and I like how you had a POV for the monster. One of the most frightening things for me is someone sneaking up behind me in the dark, I think you scared Link witless with that last stunt.

Do you intend to make a second novel starting from when Link and Midna find the Master Sword?