Shit. That was crazy. I'm in awe at your ability to write.

The characterisation of Sherlock and John are unbelievable! You are a spectacular person! The emotions! Don't get me started on those! They were brilliant! I was hooked from the first paragraph. The letters are so in character and even though the mood went from cheerful to realistically angsty I love this all the more. The poetry was amazing! No amazing isn't a good enough word. I'm running out of adjectives to convey how much I adored reading this. I need a thesaurus! That cliff hanger... I swear my heart shook.

I hope you come back to this one day and finish this. They need a happy ending!

Hope this review finds you well. Have a good day and an awesome year. Thank you so so much for sharing this!
Silver from London :D

THIS IS SO CUTE!

Sad to see it wasn't updated. I hope it will get an ending.

I just found this and it's perfect. Please, please , please, update

Oh my. Just when I thought John might finally be forced to return to England - and become Sherlock's partner in crime-solving... Things do look bleak right now. Again. I'm anxious to see where you'll take this story next.
- Dime

UPDATE you cannot leave me here

Oh, Sherlock...

Should'a known better than to think Sherlock would be able to play nice for too long. Stupid man, he's gonna regret that, but probably won't admit it. And John's gonna be doubly upset if he does get discharged because he doesn't even have the comfort of going home to see Sherlock. Maybe Lestrade can step in as a Sherock translator for them to sort this mess out.

That was intense...I felt like John and Sherlock's fight at the end wasn't built up too enough, it seemed to happen almost randomly. It would have been nice to have some more detail, so we could see more what was going through each of their heads. It felt like the fight was forced to happen, rather than being a more natural occurrence.

That was a freakin' disaster! They are both idiots and I hope they get together soon so they can stop being idiots. Did that even make sense ?

Oh Sherlock...

So I just read all of this, and you need to continue with it. I really need to know what's going to happen next, you're heading nicely into what I feel could be an excellent climax. :) I really like your extensive use of terminology-I know I wouldn't be able to write a fanfic and have it be as detailed and informed. It's impressive and enhances the quality of the story very much.

Please update

I need a new chapter!

Oh, ouch. John's lost touch with reality quite a bit, hasn't he?
...I'm not entirely sure which lines belong to Sherlock here and which to John. That first bit is John's, isn't it? Some obvious separating lines or some such would be good.
- Dime