Reviews for Lost Brother |
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musicwolf200 chapter 1 . 5/3/2019 You made be cry God dammit it's so sad |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2016 Oh my gosh! This was a very good short story, you made all the characters sound as if they were in my room right now! Keep up the good work! |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2016 So sad |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2016 Omg the emotions! :O |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2015 That is so sad! I love it! It pulled at my heart strings! |
Ekowolfe chapter 1 . 5/14/2014 You need to work on your grammar and spelling, plus I found a critical error. WHY THE HECK WOULD JAY'S DAD GIVE HIM A FREAKIN 9MM FOR HIS BIRTHDAY other than that, good! |
Ninjago1019 chapter 1 . 2/24/2014 That was so Amazing! |
akwardkitty chapter 1 . 2/24/2014 I loved this so much! I'm gonna bookmark this and read it again. |
wolfpurpledinosaur chapter 1 . 2/24/2014 Now you're making cry love the part when Kai imagined Jay and Nya dancing in the clouds I started to bawl |