bash and flashwing

Aww, that was really sweet. :3 I loved Flashwing's antics, she was hilarious, and that ending but was lovely. :3 Kinda surprises me that Splat stayed civil with Doom Stone after the breakup, but I guess satyrs are just nice like that. XD Still, really cute. You should write more stuff like this. :3

This was beautiful! I really liked this one.

The ending sections were very cute :3

Beautiful. I love the insecurity and hesitation in Thrill and Splat's determination to just go with the flow. The acceptance was perfect.
Also: Steampunk White Rabbit, lol.

Oh my god...Oh my god. Jane this has to be your best work yet. I give you an A plus and a 11/10 oh yeah broke the rating scale! XD

Excellent as always. You take as much time as you need for an update. The wait for a new chapter from you just builds up the suspense of what's to come next. ;) So you just keep on doing what you're doing. Until next time, keep writing!:)

This was quite the accurate portrayal. I of all people should know...

But moving on from that, it was also an amazingly written and wonderfully touching story. You are an amazing author as always.

Did you get the idea of chapter 1 from Romeo And Juliet? Because of 2 star crossed lovers, friends disapproval and they both die in the end. But the story is still very sweet and I turned Spy Rise into a girl to make it less disgusting for me. I just feel he's a better as Juliet even though she "dies" first and Grim Creeper gets the role of Romeo even if he's the one with the awkward moments. You'd probably understand if you know the story (Romeo And Juliet) and I think you do. I love your story and I like to read this chapter while listening to Taylor Swift's "Love Story". That song is really nice and it fits the story even though this story has a tragic ending like the original tale and the song has a happy ending.

Coming from the heart is the best message there is. It can't suck because of that fact. I'm so glad you have someone to lean on. It really does make a world of difference. Congratulations and Happy Valentine's Day right back at ya.

Annabelle, this...this was perfect. Thank you for loving my quirks, and thank you for loving me.
I love you, I will forever.

Ha Trigger Happy breaking the fourth wall?! Ha he is 1 crazy gremlin. You didn't just try, you tried and succeeded, you knocked it right outta the park. Happy Valentine's Day. It does come from the heart and your stories really can touch a persons heart, I know it's had an effect on me. Can't wait for next time. :)

It's alright, and yes. I'm alive. School, Tomodachi Life, 6 days till till Trap Team. Fanfic has been at the bottom of my priorities! I have Trap Team couples... they'll be up soon... and now I officially pair myself with Wolfgang XD

Thisoneissoadorableiamsoexcited! Ishipitsohard,pleasecontinue,ihopeyoucanreadthis!

I... I honestly almost cried. Dude! You're amazing! And umm... could you a KaosxGlumshanks? They just seem so cute together!

Right, heh. Anyway. I could swear I already reviewed this, but whatevs. This was fun if disturbing. And poor Blastermind, to be subjected to that. How'd he do it? Deesh. I'll admit, I expected Wildfire here, not Wallop, but anyway. Keep writing!

It still astounds me how you can take pairings that wouldn't ever crop up and turn them into perfect couples that make so much sense you wonder why you weren't pairing them before. Blaster and Wallop were adorable together, that quote was very sweet, and it looks like Blaster might find out what Wallop's compensating for with his loud mouth. Once again you've proved that when it comes to romance and emotion this is your crown. And of course, I would be remiss without mentioning you stroke of genius; Blastermind's controlling crystals. The crystals make me wonder about the price some of the Skylanders pay for the powers they have.