good story that is somewhat original, but does follow canon a lot so not that original. If your going to write fanfiction just write your story not regurgitate the canon.

Good fic. I can see in your writing that you lost interest progressively but i still like it. Hope you update and get over your problems in life. Cheers:)

just kill hermioneand Dumbledore, ron,mrs. wesley,and snape, but have Ginny paried with someone else.

You had something good up to Chapter 6.

Chapters 7 and 8 were completely unnecessary. Just give Harry a talking sword why don't you? Make him rich and powerful in a matter of a day! Yeah, that sounds like a good idea. Not.

You already had the fire elemental thing. You could have developed his development from there. But you just have to throw every power up conceivable in just one go. No one cares and relates to a perfect protagonist. Now you just threw away all his flaws and make your readers suffer through this crap.

Thank you for a great story

Cool fanfic. I love that you actually made a incantation that means something in another language. With my blood, with the flesh, with my bones, with my mind, with my organs, with my being, with my soul, I accept this link. Let's be one, so there can be a lot, let's be two, so it can be one, by letting us fulfill our potential.

They unite us, as a teacher and as a family member

God this story is actually incredibly unimaginative, a talking sword huh I mean that totally isn’t a popular concept for light novels in every single one with a sword. This fire elemental needs to be explored though I think it would have been better to just do fire magic rather then making harry seem more like someone from a anime.

You know the whole abused child riddled with scars trope is retarded. Harry’s life with the dursleys wasn’t that bad. Also why on earth are his scars black if a scar turns black it usually means that the flesh has entered necrosis and will start rotting away and slowly start killing you.

You had something good going until you started with the snake crap. No point is reading the rest.

One thing I really enjoy is that Harry is able to actively fight off the allure where most stories have him immune.

Wizards wear robes and cloaks only donning suits or jeans when they must venture into the muggle world

Didn’t expect to see a reference to The Wheel of Time here, but it was pretty cool so good job

Why make him keep that in him though?

I like the concept so far and hope this isn't an abandoned fic. Thanks for sharing!

The only issue so far and I love the story so far but the Chinese animagus really

loved itXD