Reviews for The Forgotten Child
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2019
Piper is a vegetarian.
Cole 420 chapter 3 . 10/9/2014
More plz plz plz! :) :)
dogbiscuit1967 chapter 3 . 7/28/2014
I have just spent most of the night reading all three of your stories. Great work thry are all interesting and enjoyable as well as original and well thought out. Can't wait to see the next chapters for all three stories
JANUS101 chapter 3 . 5/5/2014
I love this story and please update!
Who is the girl sitting next to Percy? and can you make Chapter longer.
Nav chapter 3 . 4/21/2014
Update please.
ClassicStupidGenius chapter 3 . 3/22/2014
Cool. I hope Percy learns how to speak and understand quickly. It should be faster with a daughter of Athena teaching. :) It could get problematic if he won't be able to speak and understand for much longer. Reading would definitely take the longest, but the most needed is speaking and understanding. So.. yeah.. make him learn faster! :D But not too fast as to make it seem unrealistic. Update soon. :)
ClassicStupidGenius chapter 2 . 3/22/2014
Thumbs up! :D
ClassicStupidGenius chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Nice. It's something new.. original. :) I've never read something like this before. Good job. :D
BlackLife chapter 3 . 3/6/2014
Liked the story i think this is a first and cant wait for the update but dont listen to most people unless you need the encouragement.
Krish11762 chapter 3 . 3/6/2014
The chapter was good but you really need to put some line breaks
the things that define you chapter 3 . 3/6/2014
Definitely a filler. Looking for a little more interference from someone other then Piper relationship wise. Maybe Reyna since the war is over. Just a suggestion.
demigodVixen chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
oh snap
ucbeuce chapter 3 . 3/5/2014
Wow but you should really use line spacing. Besides that, I love your story.
Gordon Ramzy chapter 2 . 3/3/2014
That was a f**king brilliant chapter the only problem I really have with it is that the was the paragraphs are structured you are supose to set it up with every time some one new speaks its a new paragraph other wise it is brilliant!
White Tiger chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
This is a really good story. I LOVE it! Please update soon!
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