plssssss updateeeeeee

I've reread this many times and all I can say is that I love your take on this! Other than the section with the FBI characters only (because that and the descriptions kind of felt boring), it's an interesting story. Although I'm mostly questioning whether or not the FBI knows about Flames because they used a box weapon... Oh, and I guess I want to see where Hibari comes in as the new head of the PSIA.

Also, the only reason why I even reviewed is because I wanted to share my ideas for who the OCs are based on (well, because I checked the reviews and it looked like nobody had a guess). They're from American History, I think. (Well, this is set in the USA.) I'm guessing they're all from the American Revolution-era.

Gilbert is most likely based on Lafayette, whose real name was Marie Joseph Paul Yves Roch Gilbert de Motier, a Frenchman that helped in the Revolution. He was actually the first one I realized. I first thought you were just being clever at naming a Frenchman fighting for America Gilbert, but came the AN. Alexandria Schuyler is one of the Schuylers... I'm guessing Eliza Schuyler, who was married to Alexander Hamilton (who was also part of the Revolution)? I'm not sure actually. Joan Laurens is, I think, based off of John Laurens, an American soldier best known for his criticism of slavery. This guess came from the fact that every time I say his name I keep saying John.

Anyway, those are my guesses. I hope I got them right.

Please please pleaseeeee updateeee ;_; I LOVE THISSSS

pleaseeeeeee update. i was waiting 1 year and thought you would uodate, but you didn't. I really like your story and you should continue

love it please continue

I love reading these types of fanfics where the FBI or the Police get involved with our dear Vongola Decimo and his guardians. So far it's an interesting story and with a hefty amount of humor added. I'm looking forward to the next update!

Nice story , author-san ,

Good job , and I really looking forward for this •

Ganbatte !

Evil! Reborn is going to torture Tsuna, to the EXTREME! And the FBI agents will end up traumatized. Looking forward to more!

Fairly entertaining after you get passed the fbi station section, was pretty bored with that, and all of the character descriptions. I just did not care too much about them as much as I do the story progression. Just felt stale/waste of time to go in depth about some of those characters, but that is just up to this point. All I really needed was the directly related agents, and their boss mainly to be described. The rest could have just been described through their actions and comments as the other main ones progressed. Once you got to the hotel it got fun though. Idk I think the issues is just your priorities in my mind at least. Focusing far too much time and effort in describing the smaller characters, when only the main ones are needed. Would allow you to work more on the story progression, events, and all that rather than having such huge chunks of description that slows things down and makes it rather dry, dull. Really not sure how to explain it, hopefully that made since and wasn't too far off.

Thanks for the new chapter! Keep up the good work!

Can't wait to see what happen next.

Following it. Though curious, to use a box. Weapon u. Need ring and flames, does the fbi have them?

TELL US WHO THEY ARE! (you finally updated... hehehe.) Update soon... ugh, the feeling of excitement that doesn't go away. I hate it so much.
Cinni

Wow this is really interesting!

Please update soon!

Its fine, that's how new ideas and technologies are born. I love it! Poor Tsuna, he's a good liar when he wants to be, but he will suffer a lot of headaches for this. Looking forward to more!