So is Yang ever going to at least say sorry for her shitty attitude.

Fuck Yang the violent bitch she fucking ruined the moment between Jaune and Blake and she gets praised for hitting Jaune fuck that shit she shouldn't get away with that.

Hey I love this story and it is extremely well written just thought I'd review and tell you that

This is an amazing story, please hurry with the rewrite.

ah, always love stalker blakee..

Definitely an interesting story!

Don't think that I missed that j-pop reference. I totally caught it, and I love gundam 00.

I really hope that you get the rewrite out quiclky.

glade to see an update on this story its been a really long time i look foreword to the rewrite

Don't be afraid to post more of the story while you redo what you want man...

Well, that's kind of sad. But oh well, good luck on the rewrite though! Looking forward to it :D

Yes this is one of my favorite arc stories. I'm so happy you decided to continue it. Thanks

Good stuff and an oc I suggest wound be Mars ultor he uses 3 weapons a bow,sword and sheild(gladius),and or a claymore with dust infusions height 6feet 7inches beacon school age 16 weight 280 pounds hair color black eye color hazel/blue appearance tall muscular a giant,personality:protective,silent,loyal,intelligent,loves books,strong willed,faunes either bear,wolf,or I don't now if this is possible dragon I know fargetched please try it though ( he gets wings)aura color gold/white or white massive aura like Jaune's fighting style with sword and shield a tank and wth claymore he like tank. ( has plate mail armor)but faster stronger not quite as tough as whith sword and sheild(prefered)likes to stab when using sheild his background in atlas in one of ironwoods precursor schools but didn't like it very isolated very innocent have not had the talk it 'll be funny good stradidgest( like Jaune ) (he's team leader)does not now semblance most Lilly defensive in nature,team mallvos MAVS Angela ange nickname 5 feet 7 inches black hair two katanas very mobile like Ren swords have a rudimentary dust spells infused( not as good as Weiss sword)black hair violet eyes raised in vale bio wealthy some what a brat parents work for the Schnees opposite of mars(no romance between them )except strong will and still loyal aura color violet semblance agility related age17 weight 145 pounds Valen spear user spear(length of spear 6feet and 2 inches)height 5 feet8 inches fast strikes very aggressive fighter minstral olive skinned brown eyes ,red aura hot headed good friend ambitious slacker age 17 semblance fire like flames bio trained since a young age to be a huntsman happy family Salvania Salvos like Valen in background 5 feet 11 inches tall rifle/axe user eye color red olive skinned faunes cat personality lazy caring very bubbly in personality like Nora likes waffles war between him Nora right

Please update and please put ruby and Pyrra in the harem great stuff please continue it

Please continue this story and also cound you make it so Jaune's shealth can switch between sword and shield great suff please update