This was adorable.

I like how you mixed in all the parts from the previous chapters. But. Everything is so hella Saccharine. Forced emotion. Not natural. Sappy in a bad way. And grammar. Gods it’s horrid.

The Sequencing of this story is weird. All the flashbacks in the wrong places.

the last one was kinda funnt but super sweet~

Absolutely adorable chapter, a very nice wwy to end this series. Thanks for the ride.

Not bad at all, I found it rather cute.

Can't say I'm completely happy with the chapter, but it was good enough.

Cute chapter, I also thought the to be quite the pair.

Good chapter, a overprotective daddy Virion made my day, lol.

Nice chapter, Maribelle x Ricken huh? I had thought them a cute couple myself.

Cute chapter, nice way to end Sumia's chapter.

Lon'qu and Olivia just make too much sense together. I very much enjoyed this chapter as well!

To be honest, Virion is one of my favorite characters in the game. I do like his supports with Sully, though my personal favorites for him are Cherche and Tharja personally, but yeah, all of Virion's supports show him to be a genuinely great human being. Plus he's funny, so if all else fails there's that. If people don't like Virion, they haven't seen any of his supports or they don't like good people haha. Great chapter like the others, I am looking forward to the rest!

YES! Ricken x Maribelle is precious! I have to say, you're backstories are very well thought out. I can se inspiration is drawn from comments made in the game and I think you do an excellent job of putting everything together! Well done!

While my preference is SumiaxChrom (Chapter 11 auto marry proposal though, not the damn pie support convo) over F!avatarxChrom, I thought this was absolutely adorable. I am the same as you, I don't believe there is a single character in fire emblem awakening that I do not like. Anyway, great job, I look forward to reading the rest!