please, post! i really want to see more of your histories on izayoi and inutaisho, your view of them is very insightful and powerful!

I love your story, if ur looking for ideas on how to write the rest maybe you could make each chapter like a journal entry, I once read a story for naruto where it was a collection of one shots and they all came at different times, it could be like Izayoi's journal entries that are not in chronological order

Great job. I wonder why Izayio could not write for two years.

I would have to say this story is worthy of becoming a chapter story.

Very powerful story. I love the way you wrote out some things that are left to the imagination of the viewer/reader. Characters were really on spot as well... I always imagined Izayoi as a much weaker character but you have shown me a new perspective on her.

... *blown away by sheer awesomeness*

Whew... that was incredible. *attempts to sit up and fix mussed up hair* This definitely belongs in my favorites...

wow!.

That was so unique! I loved how you narrated it.

Well done!