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I don't know why everyone refers to Izaya and his alternates having light brown or just brown hair. It's black. I'm honestly beginning to think that people are colorblind. I'm not insulting anyone, I am being completely and utterly serious by my statement. I don't mean to offend, or ridicule, or anything. But Izaya's and his alternates hair is so obviously black that wondering if a lot of people are just colorblind is a valid question. The only one with natural brown hair is Shizuo, and some people give him natural blond just for the hell of it anyway. But none of Izaya's alternates have brown hair, so they shouldn't be described as having such.

I honestly hate you for this. There was no need to kill Delic off.

I feel the same about Izuo

I like Shizaya better

IMMA KILL THAT FREAKIN BLONDE BEAST! YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO LAY A HAND ON HIM WITHOUT HIS CONSENT! JUST YOU WAIT HEIWAJIMA! ONE WRONG MOVE AND YOU ARE DEAD MEAT! IMMA KILL YOU DEADER THAN DEAD!

I have been binge reading this fic throughout the entire day, it is currently 0:47 in the morning and I can't believe it's over TwT

Aside from small grammatical errors the fic was beautifully written and very descriptive, which I have a great appreciation for -

The whole idea behind it fascinated me as well and I loved the fact, that you can watch as their relationship transforms to be what it is in the end
To have them face hardships and still remain by each other's side, comforting and reassuring each other.. :)

Just wanted to let you know that I really really really loved this fic and it is probably one of my favourite Shizaya fics so far, so thank you -

HAH! That's what you get, bitch! Just joking. Love you, Izaya!

Im not being a *itch but please get a beta reader. There are only a few mistakes but i think a beta reader would help you make no mistakes friendly advise from izzy

Delic*

I just read this in 4 h and I still can't go over the fact that Delivers died ... xD

OH MY GOSH THIS WAS PERFECT

Super cute story! It's funny and cute how long it took them to realize they loved one another. Typical Shizuo and Izaya. X3 I feel terrible saying this, but your grammar and spelling need work. I could be a beta for you, if you'd like. I feel terrible just giving constructive criticism without offering to help. Of course this doesn't mean you should stop writing. Continue improving and evolving. :)

I'm amazed that you finished this story. Well done~

This is my second time reading this story and I still think it is amazing.
I loved the story 3
Thank you so much for writing this author-san
Hibiya and Delics interactions were so cute and funny. Although it was very sad when Delic died ;-;
Then Shizuo and Izaya guwa they made me go through so many different emotions but I'm really hAPPY that they got a happy ending after everything they went through.

I don't know it just my browser or what?
But this is the result when i opened chapter 26 of as chosen on chrome and opera mini

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p style"max-height: 999999px; font-family: Verdana, Verdana, Arial; font-size: 11px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: 100%;"strongIt is another fic with royals and drama~ and in the omega verse. And includes a few alternates, but mostly Shizaya/strong/p
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