"So, okay, your advice is to what, exactly? Barrage her with affection like a creepy, can't-take-a-hint, fedora-wearing stalker?" When I read this I automatically thought of Freddy Krueger lol

I don't understand why this isn't getting more reviews. Honestly, it's one of the best Saints Row fanfics here and I reallly want it to get the recognition it deserves. Your writing is beautiful and Fray is perfect; congratulations on your amazing amount of talent.

Hey, I really, really enjoyed reading this chapter. I always love hearing about Nyteblade, and that they're constantly busy now is really quite awesome. And wow, Shaundi actually seems to be getting along with Matty more now - it's practically a miracle haha :) Can't wait to read more.

Damn, love the cliff-hanger, especially the metaphor of "Matt being in the real world and bleeding out from this wound". Seriously, good ending there - very chilling down the spine :D Although, now you've certainly got me on a tight-rope, wondering what's going to happen next :/ Hope you continue :)

Hope that this isnt over yet...