Reviews for Rebirth Of A Family
JustAnotherMarvelFanGirl881 chapter 4 . 2/8
oh i can't wait to find out what happens next.
pretty please update.
deathwearsblack chapter 4 . 6/8/2019
please update when you can.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/24/2018
Please update, it starts good
kageharu33 chapter 4 . 6/23/2018
Are you alive?
megan chapter 4 . 3/28/2018
i absolutly loved it and hope that you update soon as i can not get enough i would really love to see if the malfoys are likely to make an apperance and if all the deaged naruto characters are likely to attend hogwarts
NO ONE chapter 4 . 1/30/2018
Let's see: I kinda liked your story. A lot of Naruto-characters I like are in it, so that's a big plus, but also a bit of a turn off. I mean, 41 shinobi being transported into the Pottervers is a little overkill, don't you think. It will eventually rob your readers of seeing character-development and satisfying interactions between them, cause you cannot focus on every one all the time. And that's when we get sentences cramped with a list of names of people who are in the scene, but do not contributing to the scene and are just there for the benefit of being there. So, next time maybe focus on a smaller group of people.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/27/2018
Sharingan!Harry would be a nice twist to add
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13/2017
I loved the story and I hope you continue to update. Thanks :)
fenixrojo36 chapter 4 . 6/19/2017
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Saturnblue chapter 2 . 5/24/2017
I find this story rather interesting and different than the usual crossover. Did Lily think what she did won't come back and bit her butt in the end and she could full James the father of her son by making up stories to fool other people. If she claimed that Harry hogs most if not all the attention from James than the rest of the kids does it mean she intentionally let Harry be killed by Voldemort by letting him stay back instead of bringing him to the head quarters? By placing Harry into a loveless home does she intend to have Harry be killed or be abused by her sister of family or she doesn't know this part at all? She has the motive to make and break her family apart and hope she doesn't think this type of behavior will continue without consequence and no matter how hard someone try to get together with you from the beginning doesn't mean he/she will continue let you get away from crimes committed against family.

I'm glad to see James able to see thru the lies and how that person changed from their ideal person to a stranger. Hopefully he will go thru with the divorce and the same with Author Weasley. Lily should get a taste of her medicine for what she did to her family. She claimed she loved her remaining children but from what James described from his experience so far it doesn't sounds like it but selfish reasons keeping her afloat.

How come Lily's sister didn't divorce her abusive husband prior to receiving Harry and even afterwards? I guess if she was already a victim of abuse then it would be very hard for her to get away and it would need a very strong willed and courage women/men to get away from this hurdle no matter the threat hanging above his or her head. Whatever ritual she did brought help, protection, and perhaps love for our dear Harry from varies harm. Too bad our Naruto characters would not able to ever return back home according to Harry's Aunt if she did the ritual correctly. It brought them from a world torn world and war to a illusion of peace world. It will be interesting to see how the adventure will starts and how they will triumph all other obstacles. I hope James Will able to be part of Harry's life like Sirius and Remus and not let other people besides those brought by Harry's Aunt to protect from manipulation. I think Lily and Molly once their husbands divorce them will plot and plan against them and they may or may not realized their wrong doings. Good Job. Please keep writing and be inspired. -
Elfin69 chapter 4 . 5/10/2017
Too bad that they were not able to sense the Horcrux with their Chakra and remove it then. Now that James and the others know, maybe since James knows about Horcruxes, they can remove it after they get him and the others to come live with them.
Elfin69 chapter 3 . 5/10/2017
It is great that James finally found that Harry is alive. Maybe he should divorce Lily and kick her out of the family house with only her clothes and then keep the children in order to straighten them out.
Elfin69 chapter 2 . 5/10/2017
At least the others are all working together and maybe they will kick out Vernon since Petunia may own the home since it is where she grew up.
Elfin69 chapter 1 . 5/10/2017
Hopefully Vernon only yells and throws things and does not actually hurt them physically. Cannot wait to see how they get back to their own homes.
Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 4 . 5/8/2017
This my seems like a revamp of. Really old story I read once, I'm happy it's back.
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