Reviews for The Legend of the Phoenix |
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This-Mickey-Seems-Iffy chapter 1 . 11/21/2019 Trash-Brotherhood who allows non-humans is no brotherhood of steel. No, it is Brotherhood of inclusivity |
PoofyOhio chapter 12 . 7/11/2019 Not gonna lie, when she opened the box I gasped. |
Finnish Paragade chapter 12 . 5/25/2019 Uuh... You do plan to continue this, right? RIGHT? |
jakesucks12345 chapter 2 . 2/13/2018 I like how imitate the courier, sadly she died and doesn't get to see all this. |
Reikon67 chapter 12 . 4/21/2017 Plz update soon. |
AraelDranoth chapter 4 . 8/25/2016 I like the storytelling a lot but there were a ton of errors in this chapter. |
AraelDranoth chapter 3 . 8/25/2016 Hmmmm... war never changes. |
AraelDranoth chapter 2 . 8/25/2016 Hmmm the language could use a little bit of work but I like it overall. I thought standard BOS power armor was T50? |
AraelDranoth chapter 1 . 8/25/2016 Love it! Except for killing off the Sole Survivor. |
scottusa1 chapter 12 . 6/23/2016 Good chapter. Keep it up. Laters. |
a Reviewer chapter 12 . 6/22/2016 LOVE IT! I love these stories so much! The ones where humanity uses shock and awe and the author uses their own ingenuity to the universes technology, like what you did with the holoship. I love how you got the lone wanderer as the Illusive man as it makes it more original and yet OC. Just as a request though could you have Nates consciousness in an A.I. or something along those lines? Because I think that Nate and Jane need some closure or some comfort. Maybe a Synth that was modeled after him to the mannerisms to the intellect but none of the memories? Idk all I do know is that most of the best fallout stories out there have as many original MCs in their stories as possible, even if it's slightly impossible but hey it's fallout, it's practically made around that. Just a request and a praise, a Reviewer |
Reichtangle chapter 1 . 6/3/2016 oh so why shouldn't a holy cure for the brotherhood exist? |
Guest chapter 12 . 4/18/2016 Please keep this story going ;-; |
Guest chapter 9 . 4/18/2016 YES! I love it when writers actually keep Humans away from the Council |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/18/2016 Love the idea of the DeathStalkers, I hope they show up more :3 |